No, please no romance !
Fanfics like romance would become too light, fluff and outright boring !
May be one sided love from boys make it interesting and create new humour !
Yuri doesnt look good. A heir of next leviathan is impossible! Gillian has some image in school , right?

Astaroth devil can become a good source of info! His character was made to hate after all.

Vali is going to be her next slave after lucifer~!

Your story is very good pls update soon and by the way when will your oc show her real strength and scares the devils and fallen.

Yes Yuri pairing~~! it is so rare for that to happened I hope you can update more~ I wonder if the reveal of her true Identity will happen when Kokobail makes his more.

I like this

Too bad Serafall isn't here. I think she'd appreciate Gillan's sense of humor.

Niceee. I can't wait for next chapter.

Please don't forget "the strongest shield" too

Oblivion,youre really great at writing to the point that it could be canon!Great job

Side note:
Will you continue falling star its really cool

This, this my thought's(in a manner of speaking)

My mind is ALMOST, in the same boat, as gillian is, which is great, as i say it is!

Unfortunately, that is how the character (rias gremory is portrayed, in the realistic sense)

Everything gillian said about rias gremory here, is pretty much the whole of the character,
within the series, but what could "you" expect from a fan-service anime,
female protagonist such as her, ya'know?

Every highschool DxD story will, always, depict rias gremory,
in the way gillian has described her here, but it's like, some kind of
sub-liminal, message thing, that happens with anime.

Give a protagonist a background, that is almost impossible, to distinguish against reality,
but hide such subtle-ties of realism, within the character, that those who find it,
realise there is more to life, then what they already know.

(if you actually planned this chapters' dialogue, that's amazing, if you haven't, you should be proud)

Dialogue, explanation's like what gillian "spoke" of throughout, is literally unnoticable in real time,
except by a VERY small, number of individual's..FANTASTIC work,
even WHEN it's meant to be fiction!

Oblivion you are a realy gifted writer
And thanks for the story
Oh yeah are you going to continue falling star

man, your OC character sucks! You even have some interesting crossover ideas, but this junk oc Esdeath, which by the way is a cheap copy of the akame ga kill version, spoils the whole story. Your character is simply an unbearable Mary Sue! And others you always create the same character oc, the same appearance, personality and way of acting, always a mary sue, showing how your character is always better than the others, this is not even an oc, it is simply your self insertion in the story. And do you treat characters who in the original works are intelligent and cunning, as if they were now stupid, naive and desperate, really? All this to make this cheap copy of akame ga kill that you call oc look "badass"?! Bullshit!

yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes,

Who cares! People have their own taste, either good or bad. So don't go around judging what people will prefer just because you don't like what they want. Besides, what can you even do with a girl without a dick? Being gay or lesbian or some shit is better than being a pervert.

Nice Sherlock Holmes reference

Hey,
love your great work! Especially the character of Gillian.
Pls keep up with the great Story :)

I got to ask, when will Gillian reveal her true new self. As for reincarnation into a Devil, well all I can say it all fails, not from pure rejection, but her overwhelming strength showing that a full Evil Piece set, maybe more than one set would not be enough to reincarnate her.