I am here to inform you that you’ve won the “first fanfiction of 1200” reward. Not sure what it’s worth, but you have it nonetheless!

Anyways, I’m not seeing any universe breakage here, so I’m mostly interested in seeing how the full T-Sauce piece works out and what kind of adventures you have in store here. Jazz is interesting, and his narrative voice blends in really well with the whole vibe I put into 1200. Looking suspiciously like canon...

On a side note, though, the official title for Twelve Zero Zero looks like so, without any dashes in it.

Additionally, picked up a few typos: “breath” instead of “breathe” in the opening, plus “real mean” which I assume was meant to be “really mean” closer to the end.

Overall, though, thank you for being willing to explore my world and giving the consideration to Ali that I’ve never really thought about post 10:00. Looking forward where the rest of the take takes us,
-Avi