I might have a few ideas for this story.

i was actually wondering how Mabel got herself trapped in that bubble in this alternate Weirdmageddon. had she not heard the catch on swearing aliance with Bill, i'd really resent her for taking that offer without a 2nd thought. and Mabel, if you hadn't taken the journal for your puppet show, Bill wouldn't of have ruined your show for the book.

a better way of showing the Time Polices confrontation with Bill and his followers than just a simple wipeout at the start.

You're welcome ;)

So now Dipper can use magic. Nice. Maybe next time you can base it on that Dungeons' role playing game.

i may not know what you originally planed for this chapter, but i can tell that it is better than what you did plan. espesally the part with Gideon refusing to accept the possibility of Mabel ever loving him, as i always saw him to be too stubern to accept it.

while i do wished there was more to this chapter, i'm still glad you got back to the fanfic.

this sure is quite the chapter you did. even after that huge fallout between him and Mabel, Mason still cares for her even when she's being too unreasable, sad to see that going down the drain by the time the fic gets close to the end. didn't expect the bubble prison part.

Well, since the conclusion of the previous story here took me by surprise, I’ll make it a point to more closely follow this one. Interesting start, I like the character set ups but still find the lack of the actual Stanford sort of strange. Eager to see more Pacifica.

nice set up with this chapter. really shows how they've been through the last year. i actually expected those kind of conditions for the GEA like the uniform and the 95% average. i'll be looking forward for the rest of the fic to be updated and see how every thing else goes.

Hey idiot, G.F happened during the Summer and Summer isn’t 8 months long.

this is a really good start to this fanfic. keep up the good work.