update...? ...plz

This chapter was weak. A 5/10. I loved part of the start of it but the quality seemed to drop as I read more towards the end.

First off, I loved them thinking how Eren is still a threat. He IS a Monster. Loved the subtle hints of Sasha saying Eren inside Titan looks like he’s in chains. Reiner thinking Eren is not irreplaceable (that was funny).

Here’s where the quality dropped. Some of the reactions seemed weak and underwhelming compared to your other chapters. For example, Armin talking to Eren. During this episode, they showed ACTUAL PICTURES of the desert, the icy plains and part of the ocean with the moonlight, but you completely glossed over their reactions like they’ve seen shit like this before and like they didn’t care. They should be overreacting actually. They for the first time seeing pictures of land OUTSIDE THE WALLS, but what did they do? NOTHING. They didn’t react at all.

Another bad point in this chapter is the cliffhanger. I get cliffhangers if the next update doesn’t take a while, but your updates more or less take a month. More towards more...So you can see how incredibly annoying and frustrating it is to have you stop the chapter at one of the best parts. Like you could’ve had them react to it first and talk it out before ending.

The moment of Eren regaining his motivation after Armin ‘wakes him up’. THAT was such an EPIC moment but you just cut it off and NOT show their reaction. To be honest it was a disappointment... I only hope you don’t end chapters like that again because it will only annoy some of your readers in the end.

It’s just like last chapter. You had cut it off when Mikasa was punched by Titan Eren, but what happens at the beginning of this one? LITERALLY NO BODY REACTS. Of course some might know of it, but they haven’t seen it. This is what I mean by the reactions in this chapter were weak.

I’m not trying to hate. This so far is my favorite AOT reaction fanfiction and I get excited when I get a notification for a new chapter, but This chapter wasn’t it for me. Especially when there was so much good content that the watchers could’ve reacted to.

Hey dumb idea, but can you make the cast react to the full version of Guren no Yumia cause towards the end of the song, there's a line that says " The stolen horizons, the world as Eren desires" and i thought it would be cool to see how the cast would react to that line.

Freaking awesome! Update soon so i can fangirl over your amazing work!

That was such an amazing chapter! I love the looks into Jeans potential! Can’t wait for more!

Yee yee

if only you could go all out by showing Eren's genocide through sneak peeks *sighs

I honestly love this so much more than PTS. Their reactions just seem a lot more serious and as if the events actually take a tool on them instead of just feeling sad or guilty. I can’t wait for them to react to the future, that’s gonna be heartbreaking

"We'll be able to see the future. And change it."

Erm not possible considering it a fixed timeline and everything is predetermined which makes eren knowing the future tragic because he can't change the future without changing the past and if he does that then it creates a paradox.

This is why I prefer yours over power to strive. Not to be rude but you actually flush out your characters and have them dive deeper within Eren’s thoughts. Question his mentality and actions while in power to strive they mostly gloss over a lot of stuff and never give the kid the credit he deserves it’s honestly weird.

u alive?

Excited for the next chapter.

When Eren said, "The Titans are not our only enemy", he was talking about the rest of the soldiers. Basically, because no one in their right mind ought to believe in the plan Pixis proposed, they were going to become an obstacle. Eren just used the word "enemy" because that's his thought process.

Also, when he rejected the ideological view of humanity uniting against a common foe, he wasn't saying he doubted that the Titans existed just to unite them; he was saying that even a common foe will not unite humanity, and was using the current situation with the Titans as an example. In essence, he believes that humanity SHOULD unite, but he doesn't believe it actually WOULD unite.

Yey! A new episode is here!

Haha, foreshadowing.

Still heart this so much! So looking forward to more!

I’m kind of hoping for Levi’s backstory, even though it’s a LONG TIME away. Maybe there’s an OVA or something? I dunno, but if there is, can you do one? I’m not forcing you or anything, but just... maybe?