Heh. A cute, amusing one-shot. It has a lot of grammar, spelling and punctuation errors, but, ignoring that, it’s fairly decent.

I enjoyed watching Team Rocket get a bit too into their plan to help Buneary. XD And Jessie's reasoning was rather sweet. Though, at the same time, she went really overboard.

It’s quite something when Infernape, of all people (Mr. Tears and PTSD) is the one threatening Team Rocket. XD

Hmm. I wonder if Pikachu and Buneary will still go their separate ways after this? Or if Ash and Dawn will let them stay together? Well, either way, at least they got out their confessions in time!

But yeah, like I said. Pretty decent fic, though it could use a beta reader to make it the best it can be. :)

ravengal out x