Interesting story so far.

Hi,
Just been following and reading your story for a long time now, and can I say I'm am absolutely thoroughly enjoying it! Top notch, and very much appreciated!

Was also wondering if you're still taking submissions for different cultures to write in the next chapter?

Looking forward to whenever the next chapter is posted.

Cheers!

pretty good chapter.

You watched mythbusters don't you?

I have enjoyed your story greatly and I hope it always has a just to grow. New drones with new ideas and other wonders still being found.
Here goes the useless question is after all the time for Jeremy has been a few months has he been getting haircuts from drones or seeing some mammal or maybe just doing it himself. This is one of those back ground question people get that makes no difference to the story.
Sable being redeem was nice. I have found that a chance at redemption is always nice.

Thank you for your work on this and your other stories.

This was easily one of the best and most amazing chapters yet.

So, we finally see Sable redeem himself, and begin to turn it around. Him wanting to write a story about humans and the Final War, that's amazing! And his dedication to making it real, and depicting it how it really was, no matter how dark or awful, that's shows his true inner character. He has truly come full circle. And his offer to Gazelle for a lead part, that was amazing! I will love to see what he does with this. And Aelita being willing to share such data with him, of the worst horrors humanity faced and created, that says something.

The finale of the FOX drone was sad and poignant. Very well done.

I loved Ema's imagination! Those are always fun.

And Gazelle and Ema was so sweet and beautiful. It truly says something wonderful about Gazelle, to see, even a simulated image of a child who is not fully Mammal, but she instantly loved as her very own. That speaks of a truly loving heart. I hope her and Jeremy CAN have children, as she would no doubt be a wonderful mother.
And Ema could use in vitro fertilization, perhaps, using a very fine needle to fertilize an ovum. The Mammals may not yet have that technology, but that could give them a far better chance, and bypass the natural defenses that made a problem here.

And I LOVED Shizu the Mantis. We have real mantis in our garden, and they are very lovely, inquisitive and friendly. Very good choice for a gardening drone.
Was nice to see the Mayor again, and more of the wonders of human technology. And the modified radiation used to cultivate plants at accelerated growth is something they really are studying, so great on ya! And while the Mammals may not have that technology, some of the humans advanced framing techniques, like more efficient hydroponics and better farming methods could be a big help. Vertical farming is something they could do, and, say, an old office building could be refitted to be a hydroponics farm.

And even if the Mammals cannot replicate this technology yet, it's a goal to work towards. Jeremy shows them it CAN be done, and that does far more than he thinks. To inspire, and show them they CAN do it, if they try and believe in themselves.

And as to using the bodies of humans to fertilize the soil, I could see that, and the humans who died would have been happy to know their earthly remains help- to keep others alive. They were very desperate times, and everyone knew that. And it wasn't like Soylent Green, and they weren't killing people to grind them up. We came from the Earth, and to the Earth we return, in an endless cycle.
Technology or not, humans are still part of the ecosystem of the Earth.

Heck, maybe there are some Mammal cultures that actively bury their dead to nourish the earth, and thus their food is a blessing from their loved ones.

And that would be cute, to see Gazelle teach Jeremy handwriting. That could make for some cute and lovely moments.

And by all means take a nice, long break. I'd love to see more Pokemon stories from you.
You did a fabulous job here.
Thank you for taking the time to write and publish this wonderful story.:)
-CD

So much for the (pure) way of making offspring but when in doubt science it out.

What about me?

Wait... didn’t ema say she WAS preggers like 2 chapters or so ago?

I'm excited to see how many Pokemon David gonna impregnate. Love you

*oh this woman is my destiny! Say oooh oohhh shut up and dance with me!*

So the sphere has been found and right under the noses of the federal dogs no less. One can only hope that mother nature will be kind enough to allow Gazelle to have her wish to be a mother (can hear Ema yelling at Jeremy for not communicating with his 'doctor' about the ramifications of crossbreeding with a native even if her file is on record) of a hybrid offspring.

wait so this guy can read and build robots and was supposed to help rebuild the world but he cant write? WTF is that?

Could you make Gazelle walk on all fours like a normal antelope, overwhelmed by her instincts? You're writing sex scenes, so why not?

This was a cute, fun and funny chapter! Was nice to see the Mayor again. I would love to see her reaction to the wonderful data they find.

The whole things with the Federal Agents and Jeremy's plans to outwit them were fun. I liked the whole thing, and how Jeremy made them look like fools at the end was so funny, I am still laughing.

I liked the romance between Jeremy and Gazelle, they make a cute couple, and the angle she would like to be a mother was so cute. I hope they can realize that dream. It may not bring back the whole human race, but could be a wonderful sendoff for our species.

And the contents of the Data Sphere were just amazing! Good thing they got to it before the Feds did, not because it could be harmful, but they likely would have sealed it away in a vault somewhere and kept it hidden, if only out of embarrassment.
And the Mammals' reaction to the footage of the moon landing was so sweet. I liked Judy's reaction to the Astronauts on the moon.
I could see Jeremy and Aelita release the wonderful footage and information to the Mammals in time, so they can see how similar they are to us, and us to them.
It truly is worth more than all the gold and jewels in the world. The culture of an entire species, open for them. In this way, humanity will never truly be gone. We will continue to live in the Mammals' hearts and mind and culture.

"Our words, our hopes, our dreams, they are yours, now. Keep them well."