Another great fanfic! This is how this episode should have ended, or one of the ways it should've ended (she also could've gone with him, or he could have stayed). Hated how in the show Bruce just left like that, without saying goodbye and without coming back for a whole ten years. Glad Selina chewed him out here, and that Alfred stalled the pilot to let her do so. Glad Bruce apologised to her, and that she forgave him and they told each other they loved one another.

Enjoyed this! Will you be continuing it?

Wow. This was really beautiful. I actually teared up. Seeing an actual goodbye and confession of love all in the first chapter-or prologue? Amazing. it would have been nice if you could have written for the actual show! Lol. Either way, I love the way she confronted him and how Alfred distracted the pilot so she could have her chance. And Bruce just immediately being like "Forgive me! I love you!" was so refreshing. The writing style is so poetic and I really appreciate the urgency. anyway. As you see, I could go on and on. lol. Instead, I will just end it with: More Soon Please!

Loved, loved this story, wish it happened that way! Would love another chapter, but no rush.

good start! can't wait to read more.

Good stuff

Make a happy ending please. Make them get married and have children please

that's how They Did What? should have ended

OMG YES! That was so good! Keep it up!

Love it!