A great story. Very good.

Gr. You got my hopes up! I have no idea where to go from here, so don't expect suggestions from me. However, I like the idea that this is Logan's crusade. Not even Scott thinks she's still alive (at least that's what I got from the first chapter) and Logan has to prove it to everyone. Puh-lease keep going with this.

Aw, yeah. Loved this chapter. Really well-written and very moving. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Wow! I really enjoyed this! I have been a fan of X-Men since the day at age 8 that I picked up my uncle's comic book collection. Jean Grey has ALWAYS been my favorite with Wolverine a close second... so when I found this, I was very intrigued. I think that the movies are doing a wonderful job and I can't wait for the third (cuz they can't just leave it there - especially since I know what's actually happening to Jean!). I really do hope that you continue this because I'd certainly like to see more. I say Logan asking for Scott's help to find Jean would be interesting... the two men that loved her working together... As for myself, I've always hoped that Logan & Jean would end up together - although I do appreciate Scott & Jean. I say you should work the angle of Jean continuing the struggle with the dark powers (maybe they are what has kept her alive?). In the comics she turns into the Dark Phoenix and I really liked that aspect of her... maybe you could delve into that, maybe just not as deep and maybe she DOESN'T turn into something bad, but it touches her just enough to make an interesting plot... :P Anyway, those are my thoughts. Whatever you decide to do with this story, I'll still enjoy it! Keep up the great writing!

I really like this story, a brilliant start, and I also feel that you are right it would be a good idea to have Scott help him, bring her two loves closer together?
Shaz

awesome story. glad i bought X2. i'd love to read more! _~

Very nice. I would definitely like to read more! :)

Hi liked it are u doing moere chapters?

Aww how cute... I love it but, maybe next time you could seprate the Song form the Story, with like one of these "_" It'd be easier to read. But I thought it was sweet. And sad. *Hugs Jean* I KNOW your not dead, how could I be hugging you? WAH

Jean: Don't worry were getting her mental help...

Sniff.

Tilly

This is a beautiful story. I like how you added parts of the movie and expanded on them. You are a great writer and I have no doubt that you'll someday become a best selling author. :) I hope you continue this story - I would love to read more. Please send me an e-mail if you do: Thanks!

very good! very nice! it makes me remember things xP..continue please!

cute chapter, i really liked it, logan's determination and jean is definately alive, thanks for sharing

I LOVE this, seriously, I do, I'm adding it to my favourite stories right now. The symbolism of the rock throwing is beautiful, and so in character, I just, I love it, it all works really well. Is this going to be a Logan/Jean fic? Or is it more of a friendship piece? I love Logan/Jean, so this fic so far is one of the best I've read, in my opinion. Again, absolutely love the symbolism!

Also, are those lyrics you added in, or a poem? And did you make them up, or if not, what are they? Because I really like them.

Please continue this soon, I'll keep checking back! :)

sweet story!