it looks like a good story but I think u rushed it to much and and you should look up character development. harry would not be like this after such a major revelation. i can see him being angry but that much change and shocking facts should have made his angry, shocked and tired. he would not have such a radical change like that. likd I can see him being angry and holding himself together when he was before life and death. but he should have gone back and found a place to pull himself together. then prepare. learn the mind arts, train magically and physical, and get a plan together. he was just told most if his life was a lie. he probably would have delved into the mind arts as fast as he could. so no one could mess with his mind. he should have made plans. he was told by death and life itself that albus was really powerful and smart. that he was controlling his whole life. he would probably have avoided him until he knew he could take him and his goons out. gathered friend, knowledge, and tryed to pull himself together

So Littlefinger is there why? Already accused and you put him there?

Robert didn't use a sword

What is the POINT of lying about the CROWN Prince marrying a LOW-BORN instead of who his wife truly is...? The whole story makes NO SENSE WHATSOEVER..

Prince Hoster? There are no princes or princesses in Westeros a part from the Martell and Targaryen. There are Lords and Ladies! All of them are Lord's and Ladies. It's the 3 time I gave your story a try just because I love HP and GoT crossovers. Third time I got annoyed by all the mistakes and just stupidness. Your story has a lot of potential but you should re wite it being more realistic.

you remember that girl from harry potter?
yeah,
well she got raped
and that other girl too
and this one
and that one
even this one
this one too but this one killed herself after that

bruh you do like girls getting raped ey

Quick question why change Harrys name to Hadrian? Is this a oc eith Harry Potter powers?

Sigh clichéd nonsense the worse kind of clichés at that.

i'm out. i made it to about where he was introducing himself to the goblin king.

...I'm not opposed to cliches, in of themselves, they're cliches for a reason after all, but you seemed to have tried to stuff every single last one of them you could in as short a space as possible, rather than fleshing them out over time. that's just bad writing, dude.

Either this author is a Tory or he hates Tony Blair because he was just portrayed as a complete imbecile.

Man this is brutal...

Honestly...I wouldn't have bothered to go back...what for?
It's not like anything you do would have any real value...the world is going to end either way in a years time. I'd piss on having revenge. Just promise me Dumbles will go to hell and then send me on to the next world.

Didn’t Hoster basically force the betrothal on stark and Arryn lol

I don’t see how baratheon choosing Rhaegars wife from someone in Essos helps the Baratheon house? Or why it would secure their allegiance?