Hi! I love this story and your writing. Can’t wait to read more!

Yey! A new update!

So long, so good, and so hot! This is so worth the wait!

Still love this so much!

YOU UPDATEEEEED! I’m a happy person :)

I really like how you’re developing this, is nice! Both Lance and Keith have troubles with the feels, it’s kind of adorable.

Kudos!

I loved this fic. This is amazing and the writing is great and it deserve so much more love!

Oooooh you updated! This chapter was awesome, but then again, all your chapters are. I’ve been expecting this since last chapter, and let me tell you, you did not disappoint. And I totally support Krolia and Martha being the bests of friends, specially if Krolia can smell if Lance has sex with Keith, that would be hilarious!

Now, into the chapter. I like how you added some of Lance’s past, and I would like some more in the future (wink). And how Villain!Lance somehow still gets to be more respected and liked than the actual hero? Amazing, ten outta ten.

Kudos!

Yaaaasssssss! I’m in love with these two, thy’re just so sweet!

OH MY GOD YOU UPDATED! When I saw the notification I screamed, I’m not gonna lie hehehe.

Lance calling Keith ‘his’ hero... I think I died. And just like everything that just happened! Keith not minding begging? When has THAT happened before?! It blowed my mind. And of course, Pidge and Hunk needed to do things more interesting.

I don’t know why, but I had the feeling Keith had never been fucked before. Like, it kinda made sense. Idk, I really liked this chapter, I’m so glad you posted! Kudos!

I'm Trash. I am trash. That is all...

Holy shit that was so delightfully sinful and damnit I FUCKING LOVED THIS CHAPTER.

NOW HURRY UP AND GIVE ME THE GOODS BEFORE I LOSE MY SHIT.

YYYYYAAAAASSSSSS I NEEDED THE #gayparents! THIS WAS A THING I NEVER KNEW I NEEDED UNTIL I HAD IT AND IT WAS BEAUTIMUS. I fucking love the masked caper feel of all of this. I love that Lance gets to be a badass. Because with his cockiness I totally feel it! He IS A BADASS. GOD... I love this too much. How dare you make me love something so vehemently.

You know how much of a fan I am of relentless teasing but even this was so deliciously unfair. OMG... I FUCKING NEEDED THIS IN MY LIFE. I can just see it all panning out. I have my thoughts on how it's going to play out but I'm keeping that to myself as I want to experience your work of art in all it's glory.

There is nothing wrong with wanting a story that has plot! Even when the story is supposed to be smut. Just remember that.

ALL THE BEST STORIES ARE PLOT DRIVEN! It makes the eventual contact that much sweeter because there is a reason to it.

And dear god do I love the tension in this chapter.

LUV I HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS.

Mostly questions around HOW YOU COULD HAVE HIDDEN THIS MASTERFUL GRIP ON SENSUAL SEXUALITY FROM ME?!

I am... shocked. And SHOOK. And oh so very proud. Like... holy shit. It's like watching my best friend graduate. Like... I really have no words. CAUSE THAT WAS FUCKING HOT.

Then again, I am a TOTAL sucker for self-pleasure in writing. People just don't write it because it's so much more personal than sex. Which is just a crime. There can be a lot of insight gained about a character given the way they "take care of themselves". And you, dear, have given us readers quite the show in this chapter.

Bravo, Luv.

... oh dear... Here I am.

I'm not sure what I'd expected walking into this. I'd had my suspicions after all of our talks. But my dear sweet Luv, I could not have even begun to prepare myself for the treat I was in for. Truly. This whole first chapter was a riot of dark and witty humor, tantalizing sex appeal, and my god some of the best inner dialogue I've EVER FUCKING READ.

How on this god's green earth did I get lucky enough to be your friend and co-writer?

Cause I'm pretty sure that uses up all the good karma I will ever accumulate in my life.

Can't wait to read the rest my dearest!

I don’t know how you manage to make every chapter the best one of this story. I LOVED IT! The heist was totally awesome, and Griffin was an ass as always, so glad Lance covered that. And Blue’s interactions with the crowds! I am in love. The all that shit with Keith, and the not-subtle-al-all flirting... it was just so amazing my heart still pounds!

But the better part was when Keith came to Lance’s. I’ve been waiting for this moment since I saw the tittle of this story! OH MY GOD I CANNOT THINK! IT WAS THE BEST THING EVER!

How are they gonna go from there? They’re rivals! But they love each other—and don’t bullshit me, you know I’m right! AAAAAAAAAH, this is just so exiting!

Kudos, Lu!

This chapter was amazing! I love Adam, he’s like me in the story hahahahaha. And Lance’s word vomiting! Totally awesome.

But the end! Oh my God Keith’s gonna believe it was all a trap and he’s gonna be so mad and sad, and Lance will be like ‘holly fuck I ruined everything’, and it’ll all be a mess!

Even when I know it will happen, and that I know I’ll probably cry, I can’t wait for next chapter hehe.