Will there be more father and son moments in this fic?
But all in all great chapter as always! Good luck on future chapters!

I really want to see more Takasugi/Seita interaction in this fic seriously... will you explore Takasugi's fatherly side?

well.. It's not really a matter of something being off.. it's just that I don't really have anything to compare on because you are actually the firsti think) to write him so. well in a fic. so please don't misunderstand. I love your story... and that I will always look forward for future chapters. Thanks Author-san!

This is sad. Seriously.

I’m soooo impressed by your ability in depicting a “difficult” character like Takasugi in this what if. To me he is more than believable and I appreciate the pace you’re giving to the whole story (I especially savoured Setsuna’s character, really!)
Bravo! keep on with the good work, I’ll be reading for sure! *_*

oh man this is crazy! Takasugi's reaction I can't really say if it is spot on but man this is... so sad gosh hahaha
he thought Seita was dead...
so this is going to end soon? I'm gonna miss this so much

happy anniversary! wow it's been a year!
i honestly don't mind that Hinowa's pov came first it actually makes sense.
but I'm still excited for takasugi's pov so I'm gonna wait patiently! :P

Mitsuki can mean ,"three months", "Beautiful Moon", "Full Moon", or in the boruto anime's case "Snake Vessel".
I love your story! Good job!
And now I'm going to wait for takasugi's reaction.

well I was reading chapter 9 at 3am back in wherever I am... my mother found me out at scolded the heck out of me.
and I don't mind it being hinowa's perspective first because it's actually appropriate since setsuna already died on the previous chapter.
oh man! now I'm excited for takasugi's pov!
thanks again for this wonderful chapter author-san!
but though... i understand your busy and everything with your life so please... don't take too long? nah never mind . have a wonderful day author-san

well what do you know... you just made me cry! T_T
I just came back today from doing my school works ... oh gosh school requirements are such a pain in the a**.
but anyway this chapter is so sad.
which would go first Hinowa's POV or Shinsuke's POV,? either way... I'm going to wait patiently since I still have one more requirement to do!
thank you for the chapter!

Finally figured out a name for me.
When I stumbled upon this fic on the net I was like,"what? Seita and Takasugi? What could possibly happen to connect this two anyway?"
And then it hit me.
Of course Takasugi can be a potential father.
And because of that I got excited. And now I wanted to know how far this fic will go and that I want to see this to the end.
Setsuna is a warrior and I admire her for that and the fact that having Seita is her way of rebelling and her way of being free was both admirable and heartbreaking.
I'm looking forward for more.
Thank you so much for this

here I am reading this at 3 am... you almost made me cry(sorry, I don't cry easily, one of my weirdest abilities XD. the only two things that made me cry are gintoki's backstory and the sacrifice made by naruto's parents.. )
Of course I'm enjoying this because why not? I want to see how you can connect the Joui 4's brief visit to Yoshiwara and Seita's birth and I must admit this is one heck of a ride. because I personally want to know who Seita's father is in the canon(which is something that will never happen) and this story is not exactly hard to imagine as part of canon( but that's my opinion.)

Takasugi's reaction is something I'm looking forward to see. Coming back a year later just to find out that the woman you wanted to see died months prior to your return. I can just imagine him getting all emo inside of his head and the "i simply want to destroy" mantra repeats over and over in his head. :P sorry I got over myself again.

The Yakulk craving was cute, I love how you manage to incorporate that.

what I appreciate the most about you and your story is that you actually use line from Takasugi Shinsaku's poems which probably took a lot of time to understand what he means and to rearrange to suite Takasugi Shinsuke's vibe and emo tendencies.

and oh yes author-san Setsuna definitely made an impression on me personally!

arghhh! you are just so cool! you chose a good name for her.

okay I'm rambling probably beacuse I suddenly woke up at 3, am for no apparent reason but hey maybe it's just my body telling me that your story updated :P

yes i know it's not healthy .
but anyway author-san! thank you for this wonderful master piece and that I want you to know that I will always look forward for the next chapter of this story until the end.
I'm with you on this journey.

I'm back hahaha! I bookmarked this story on my browser so that I would know if it updated because I was so hooked! Thanks for the clarification of their ages, I understand it now. I was so confused at first and I will thank you again for that.
I'm so excited for the next chapter (wait, does takasugi knows she's dead?)

yey! you updated! thank you so much author I was waiting for this!

Knowing that hinowa will lose her legs for this and that setsuna will die... i just can't...
sorry I'm getting ahead of myself.
is this the last flashback or is there another chapter?
But anyway I enjoyed this and that I can't wait for what's going to happen next!
Thank You so much for this Author!