this chapter is feels unfinished...still good chapter tho ..

this chapter is amazing, great development after 4 chapters too... nice...

This is a really well done story so far and I'm curious to see Pacifica's growth.

this chapter is longer and has better development...nice

this chapter feels short...

pretty good start

Pacifica has a good sense of humor in this story. Cant wait to read the next chapter.

I’ll be really honest and say I would’ve slapped the fuck out of Pacifica right then and there if I was Dipper because her grivences were nothing.

Luckily I like their shipping too much to imagine that happening.

Keep going, I'm loving it 3

Wooo, good girl, Pacifica. In order to get better, you just have to admit it and ask for help.

Oooh, keep going! This is getting super awesome right now! I want to see where it goes! :D

Keep up the fantastic work here! I'm loving it so far! :)

Good start but here’s a word of advice: don’t settle for around 1K words per chapter.

The sweet spot should be 3K-5K words per chapter. Of course, if you’re gonna go with the complicated and massive universe route, it should be 8K-12K like what I’m doing but you’ll likely have no need.

Plenty of dialogue, details, originality, and consistent 3K-5K chapters. Guaranteed to be a successful fanfic.

I see potential. Interested in seeing where this goes.

It's a good start. A bit short, but well written nonetheless. I look forward to seeing this continue.

This is really good! Keep it up!