| Reviews for Master of Steel |
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   ob1292 chapter 29 . 10/11 An interesting story thus far, I hope to see it continue |
| ob1292 chapter 22 . 10/11 He should have had Hestia attack the leader before he could escape, attacking the trainer is more effective and prevents them from releasing more Pokemon |
| ob1292 chapter 8 . 10/11 If Solaire does travel with Ash hopefully he will have a positive influence on him and get Ash to grow up and actually train all of his Pokemon and battle to the fullest extent of his abilities |
| Guest chapter 29 . 8/2 Please update soon i love this history |
| Guest chapter 29 . 7/30 Please update your history is so good |
| TriggerLaw chapter 26 . 7/10 Love it, please update soon! |
| TriggerLaw chapter 3 . 7/9 Love it |
| NeoNazo356 chapter 1 . 7/7 Hm. An interesting start. The Transmigration is a tad over-used, but its still better than "God Damn Truck-kun". |
| Kenrio chapter 21 . 7/5 why he dont call Steve or the gym leader ? he is to arrogant |
| Kenrio chapter 15 . 7/5 why he he dont call the police in this guy |
| Kenrio chapter 8 . 7/5 so your mc will be ash side kick huh |
| BlueMapple chapter 9 . 6/15 I loved your story. And then Ash's group arrived and everything was finished. My worst nightmare happened : you made him travel with them. I hate all stories where the OC is forced to travel with Ash or in group in general. They are always boring because I couldn't care less about the other characters and the story is forcing me to look at them like if I was supposed to like them. I loved your story because your OC was a solo traveller, he was training alone, growing alone and going wherever he wanted. He was a free spirit ! You destroyed all of this. If I was transported in the pokemon world, never in hell would I travel with Ash. You main character became a support character, dependent of the group's whims. He completely lost his independance. This is the end for me. I really want to cry because I haden't seen a good story in a long time. |
| dsrocker9230 chapter 29 . 4/29 hey bro please I need more chapter here . |
| HollowedPerseus17 chapter 29 . 4/28 I don’t know if you have played sword or shield yet but might I recommend teaching solid and saphira steel beam later on in your story? It’s a great steel damaging move with a pretty big in game drawback of a recoil of 50% of your max hp rounded up. Steelix can learn it in game but since aggron isn’t in Galar it can’t. I figured it wouldn’t be too much of a stretch for it to learn it. Besides due to rock head neither of them will take recoil when using a move that’s on par with jirachi’s doom desire |
| Rayakashi chapter 1 . 4/26 What's with all the fucking ads!? |
