Reviews for Jaune's Schneecret Admirer
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3
Can't help but imagine that notebook being read by a different verse's Weiss.
Axccel chapter 1 . 3/13
A very sweet story I really hope is continued or picked up in another fic.

Gotta say, though, Weiss is the team mom/common sense. Yang isn’t motherlike at all in the series.
Fyr RedNight chapter 1 . 3/3
I liked this story.
The way how you went about developing a relationship between Weiss and Jaune through Yang's help was both sweet and endearing to read.
Stickginge chapter 1 . 2/18
Oh my, stubborn Weiss would drive me crazy with her sheer amount of denial. Still, very adorable fluff and a enjoyable read.
Sapoman chapter 1 . 2/17
Any hope of you writing out the date? Oh man, that would be glorious.
Sophisticated Sage chapter 1 . 1/20
Ruby and Weiss have the greatest dynamic out of the whole team. I just had to point that out :D
TheEverlastingHater chapter 1 . 1/2
jesus fucking christ lmao
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2019
This is something that applies to all your fics but I can’t be bothered to say the same things on each one. Your banter is amazing. Really, it makes these fics easy and fun to read, you have a real knack for it. It’s back and forth ribbing, bringing up stuff from the past, it’s witty and in-character and it’s original and funny. You’re also very good at making various ideas work. Weiss’s feelings being repressed because she’s a complete tsundere is completely believable. Jaune bonding with Nora over porn and that leading to a friends with benefits relationship is actually believable. Jaune visiting Summer’s household and bonding with her through his trauma is plausible. Jaune snagging a milf by being a crossing guard is plausible... when you write it and flesh it out and make it more believable and realistic. These characters aren’t written lazily. They’re well-described and that makes them much more believable than some of the shit that gets pumped into this website. This is like the top 10% of RWBY fics I’ve read, on tier with Couer Al Aran but not written by someone who’s getting slave-driven for a story a day by a patreon account. Nice work.
PasiveNox chapter 1 . 11/13/2019
Hahahahahahahahah great
axel100 chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
Hilarious. Of course now Jaune has to deal with the fact that "mom" sat in his lap and he liked it.
gottahavekyuubi chapter 1 . 10/3/2019
I didn’t really know what to expect but lord this was short, sweet and pretty hilarious. Kudos!
Sunkiller chapter 1 . 9/27/2019
More?
Wind Dragon Master chapter 1 . 9/11/2019
I genuinely LOVED this. The giddiness inside me is making me feel like a schoolgirl! This is so cute that... I can’t even—! I’m Following this story in the hopes that one day, A SEQUEL WOULD BE BORN!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2019
I liked it was a fun one shot
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2019
Tsundere Weiss is adorable
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