Sorry, im just now getting to your latest chapters. Life has been crazy as of late. So I have honestly no words for the last two chapters. I thought Tommy would kill Jaysin, then Billie and move on to something else. Had no idea the fight would turn into what it did.

You showed how strong and talented of a fighter Jaysin was and they way you showcased Tommy's ranger forms was cool. But the mvp of the story is Billie. She is ruthless, evil, controlling, and manipulating. The way she brought Tommy to heel was brillant. The way you ended it with all 3 leaving there world in chaos and going out into the multiverse to establish their kingdom rule is straight up horrorfying given there personalities.

Crazy ride u took us on. I enjoyed and loved this story so much! Thank you for writing such a dark unique twist on Power Rangers.

Wow, i honestly dont know what to say about the king of evil chapter. Tommy views everything he has done to Jaysin as "helping" & "shaping" him to be the evil ranger zordon wanted him be as thanks for what sparing him and breaking him free of the spell of goodness which he saw as a humiliation and a punishment on jaysin's part but still sees jaysin as a friend? That sir, is a truly messed up friend. I'd hate it if my friend stole my girl, stole my job, killed our friends, and repeatedly tried to kill me all under the guise of "toughing me up" yeah screw that.

Jaysin on the other hand saw things as Tommy being jealous and hateful toward him and so jaysin responded in kind. You could not have two more jacked interpretations on the same experinces by two ppl. U could say there whole rivalry/friendship was a giant misunderstanding of intentions. I mean i dunno how else to sum up there relationship other then well thats just the norm if ur from earth 3-29 :/

I was also shocked, though i shouldnt be by now. But the gravezord and the dragonzord destoryed. Just more victims of tommy's sick games. Then u had the tommy and jaysin heart to heart where right before ending the chapter as there fight starts. Leaving us in suspense till the next chapter. Great job.

I have a feeling tommy is going to kill jaysin. He can dual wield the draggon dagger and saba, he has his dino black powers so he has speed on top of invisibility and if that wasnt enough to make him a danger who doesnt need to morph, he still has that master morpher he stole from his doppleganger. Ur tommy is honestly shaping up to be far scarier then drakkon and maybe even stronger in certain reguards and situations.

I really hope u didnt give us the jaysin x billie only to kill him off. I mean Billie has that messed up childhood, she lost her ranger friends, trinidad, delphine, and now she has jaysin finally if she loses him... It be too much loss on her character. We all saw what Jaysin did when billie was killed by the arbiter. Before jaysin brought her back using the crown from power rangers overdrive. I couldnt imagen how she would literally snap at the loss of jaysin. (Plz dont take that as a suggestion or an idea)

Reguardless, the way u portray ur characters. Good job. In certain moments and situations u forget there evil mass murdering tyrannical overlords and serial killers with breath taking body counts between them coupled with the powers and zords that come from being a power ranger.

This is one ranger dimension where there power corrupted them and makes u realize The Arbiter may be right about purging the grid with rangers like them. Who control and destory things like they were gods.

Ask and you shall receive! The return of true evil is ny far in my opinion your darkest chapter. We wanted to know what happen to earth 3-29 tommy oliver we got and how you reintroduced him back into the story and gave us those flashbacks between him and Jaysin were great. Jason and tommy best of friends. Jaysin and Thomas the best of rivals. I love that parallel.

Also on Tommy, i was honestly wondering what direction you could go with him. I mean the evil tommy/drakkon thing has been over used. So that said you gave a refreshing take on an evil tommy and he is a truly messed up character. He is what the Psycho Rangers should have been. Drakkon in the comic was a threat to the multiverse but your tommy is deeply evil. A straight up serial killer and with that master morpher...i honestly am chilled and creeped out to see what he will do. He may even be more dangerous then Drakkon!

Lastly, you gave us the Jaysin x Billie romance and u wrote in a way it didnt seem forced, or u were just giving us what we wanted. It didnt mess with the integrity of ur writing and what we have come to expect from your stories. It was good to see those to get togeather. I honestly, think they make a good couple. Jaysin is power, he is rage. Billie is savage but, tempered, super smart, and has that compassion even though she is a straight up cold blooded killer.

But now that we have a confrontation with Tommy coming up and he already killed off two of your other side characters in a big way im actually hesitant to read the next chapter The King of Evil...i want to know what happens but i dont because im afraid to find out...great job! You exceeding my expections and imagination.

Is this canon to the unworthy videos ?
It's a nice story.

First i wanna say great story, love the good is evil and evil is good theme you have going. I love the emotion and the depths of your characters. That being said im a huge tommy fan, i was dissapointed he was killed off screen with no real reason why or who did it. Just dead and gutted in his apartment. Can you maybe write a chapter or something explaining what happen to Thomas Oliveira the earth 3-29 tommy oliver? And maybe a romance chapter between Jaysin and billie please? I really want to see those characters hook up. Since they have that strong enduring bond and jaysin killed ALOT of people to bring her back for what friendship? Please, no one does all tyat work to bring someone back settles for friendship.

Dude! This is a messed up story. I dont even like power rangers but i read this because liked ur brightburn story and i dunno you write some dark stories. I never seen an author care so little for his own characters. Like i feel more protective of ur characters then u do. After reading YOUR story and coming to LOVE your characters i want to see them get a damn win! Can u do a romance speical or something like Jaysin and Billie pairing? They clearly havesomething special and it should be explored! For once let ur characters get a win! These two deserve it!

Okay, after watching unworthy on youtube i see what u did. U took The Arbiter speech on the ranger overlords, turned it into a fanfiction prequel? Clever, then u went further turning good evil and evil good. Nice, story, very dark. I assume now that the base story is done and judging by the chrono ranger speical this story is on going depending on the next episode unworthy puts out? Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Good job man 100/10

So, last chapter you have Jaysin developing something of a conscience after a crisis of morality. He is now acting shocked and dismayed by Kim's and Billie's attitudes and actions, given their apparently complete lack of empathy and total disregard for all the lives they have ended. Yet the Corruption of the Morphing Grid has affected him too, turning him angry and paranoid. And he has allowed Kim to seduce him.

And now Zachary's twin brother has learned the secret of the Power Rangers and wishes to follow in his brother's footsteps as a malevolent Black Ranger.

Here in this chapter there are the opposite forces from their counterparts featured in the Space Ranger saga, and the battle to save Earth is due to be repeated here. But there is a big gap in the lineup due to Billie's callous murder of Justin for no other reason than he had no future as a Ranger on Earth. She just shoots hin dead, a kid of ten, and gives him about as much further thought as yesterday's newspaper. Cold hearted and brutal. And Jaysin is just beginning to understand the rationale for the Arbiter's relentless crusade to purge the Morphing Grid of corruption.

Arbiter is a great villain, just an utter force of nature so I'm interested to see where this goes.
I'm gonna be honest and say that you could do with giving your writing another proof read.

Oh and I mentioned this fic in the PowerHour Discord Server, so the Pink Ranger's actress/Project Manager and the Concept artist/Illustrator for Unworthy have seen it.

No honour among thieves, huh?

This isn't complete, is it? I'd like to see the two of them take a personal journey together across the multiverse, saving other Rangers from this Arbiter (even though he proclaims himself a force for good, he does seem to be a bit full of himself, and that can turn bad in a heartbeat.). Maybe along the way they might even find some good in themselves and become worthy of the Ranger title...

You may want to give a newly-posted story of mine a quick look. It's only the first chapter of a story I've titled "Glory the Vampire Slayer."

Lemme know whatcha think, and don't forget to send me any new chapters of this and your other work so I can beta.

Hey, don't forget, I offered to beta your stuff. Do you use Google Docs?

Hey, a new story and a good start.. I understand now where you got your nom de plume. You make this version of Jason Scott feel like your Brightburn/Superior, so the only thing I can think about is "Look out Galaxy!"

Let's see how the other chapters tell the story...