| Reviews for The Crimson Flight, Ruin to Awakening |
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Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 1 . 7/20/2019 Whoa! An interesting start. Never seen a fanfic like this involving Caeldori somehow arriving in Ylisse and taking on the name Cordelia instead! I like this idea. I really do! But shouldn’t you add Caeldori to the story summary of characters involved so not too many people will be confused? Anyway, I can’t wait to see where this’ll go! Will Caeldori/Cordelia be able to move on from her past? Or will it come back to haunt her in a different way? What about those Invisible Soldiers? And who I assumed was Severa/Selena that sent her to Ylisse before her death? Hmm... I can only guess... Please update again soon! I’d love to see where this’ll go! Also, I was wondering, will Caeldori/Cordelia have that same canonical crush on Chrom like in the games? Just wondering is all. Otherwise things may get a little dramatic between Caeldori/Cordelia and Sumia, along with whoever the former is paired with... Is it Robin by the way? That’s what it says on the summary, but I don’t know if that’s your plan or not. Lol. See ya next update. I’ll be keeping an eye on this! |
frozenseed chapter 1 . 7/17/2019 Oh? I didn't expect a rewrite. But I already like this new one more. The start of Caeldori's character development to become the tough Cordelia is portrayed well here. Also Sumia coming up with the new name makes an amazing start to their friendship. It's so sad that Selena still had to die, though. |