Ughh, can’t do this, never liked Ginny and Harry together. Thought I could over look it since this is a very interesting story, but sorry just don’t like her. My personal opinion, I know a lot of people who love that pairing, but sorry not for me. Good luck with the story.

And how is Ginny into sharing? Harry is in love with Hermione the adult one of his memories and the one in front of him he is shaping into that one.

I also wonder who has the diary if Hogwarts is better the castle must be screaming about the black artifact

Also I wonder if Luna knows something?

I look forward to the next chapter.

Soon she shall recover soon. Yes the precious school told about in stories shall soon recover

Going to have to go back and see what you mean about Hogwarts recovering? If you have Ron crashing into the Whomping willow or the school that could’ve been done in this chapter I feel whomping willow or the school that could’ve been done in this chapter, I feel. With the fallout in the next. Awaiting more.

Can't wait till he takes control of the snake he is the magical heir to slytherin so it should obay him also do you think hitting the journal with the killing curse would destroy it

so how is Hermione when she has muk

ARIGATOU! Thanks for the chapter! Great chapter as usual. I loved how you weaved the depressing and jovial moments together during the recollection. I see Albus is still scheming away too, and the rat's days seem quite numbered. All in all, awesome work, and I hope you have a wonderful day! :)

Crumbs ! So much happening this Chapter & almost all unexpected . Ginny & Harry's interaction made even my old cynical heart melt . While 'Bonking with Tonks' is fun to read , it's these intimate human moments that make superb stories like this worth coming back to read again & again .
Intrigued what you'll throw at us next ? Please keep updating regularly . LK out .

Ok, so A) Harry's Ginny has been reborn. And B) the butterfly effect has struck, creating another branching timeline. This is getting interesting...

this is nice and good. keep going

Please update soon this is to good not to update

This is interesting. I can see Ginny holding many of the clues needed for the Hogwarts adventures.

I don't see Harry wanting to deal with all this crap again. If anything, I can see him making something like a magical space ship or spindizzy and move to Venus or Mars.

This was a good catch up chapter for Ginny to gain backstory.
Harry has yet to mean his new discovery that sex is utterly awesome. It wouldn't be surprised if he'd never had sex in all that time. It seemed like he was functioning more as a magical zombie than as human.

I was skimming the reviews. I agree with the guy that mentioned the AD stuff needed to be explained earlier. It sounds like future AD may be a magical clone or summoning or something of a dark lord AD. At that point, it was more about survival and trying to get rid of the last muggles than anything else.

The only real plot hole is that neither side seemed to want to leave the planet. I could see the naturals not having the ability to. Sure, our space stuff could map the planet and spy every where. That doesn't mean ever were able to actually develop tech to get anywhere in the solar system.

It seems like it should be possible for magicals to leave the planet and explore and terraform or just build a dome or something on a safe location. Toss up a fidelus and likely the naturals would never be able to target them.

I'm more surprised that your future death world didn't just become a generic fantasy world.

Can't wait to find out how kinky this Ginny is. I can see her agreeing on Hermione. After 15 minutes of seeing Harry and Tonks interact, well she'd agree that she'd need to be included as well.

Okay I am awake its not 3am and I am using a different name.

Lets do this.

The good, my preference has always been the time travel trope. I find this story to have cleanly shored up several issues that follows this style. The fact as a 40 year old I can barely remember middle school having a war torn 1000 year old wizard remember anything from school days is so accurate. You have a good flow with your main character a mature adult doesn't fall into the trap of pride and flaunting his power over a toddler. The fact that harry pity's draco over subjugating him shows you have a strong character grasp.

The Bad ( THIS IS THE REASON I FEEL YOUR REVIEW COUNT IT LOW )
It comes down to your first couple chapters they are off putting. The story contradicts itself and leave errors and gaps that from a character point of view makes sense but from the readers point of view its frustrating, The main issue was the bright lord cognitively didn't make sense with the time line. And you may have fixed it in CH 28 but that was far too late to keep beginner readers invested. I came into this committed most readers you will loss CH 1 if it doesn't make sense.

Over all you have a good grasp and this could easily be a great. Clean up some of your original chapters keep a steady story flow and don't get to bogged down in the pointless plot points. Toss the reader some gratification bones every once in a while, Let harry flex his 1k knowledge and power and then reign it back in. Kinda like seeing something unbelievable doing a double take and its not there anymore. You know it happened but you cant explain it to others without coming across as a crazy person.

good luck

Please update soon