I am now so exited for the next chapter! This one was also very good with Alex who figured out the kidnapping and his mixed emotions about Pytor. I liked also the POV from Sabine and k-unit, and i can't wait to read Yassens thoughts about the whole situation. Hope to see soon again an update

It was a great chapter. Alex is rescued

Poor Rico. Pytor is a really insane criminal. If Alex is coming back. He has a big problem

Great chapter

Absolutely phenomenal. Can't express how excited I am for the next chapter! Thanks so much for posting.

Come on, I can't wait to see what'll happen between Sabina and Yassen, I want answers please!

Please update soon!

Its a good story, but there are just two minor inaccuracies that bother me a little and I feel like you would appreciate knowing.

1.) When B squadron is rescuing Alex in chapter 3, Ghost says they are not part of the army which is not true. Delta Force is the top unit of the US Army. They recruit from the Rangers and Green Berets (who also are US Army). In the same way as the SAS is part of the British Army and SBS is part of the British Royal Navy (even though, I do not know how they recruit exactly). So Ghost would have probably answered him as Yes, and I doubt he would make any mention being part of the Unit.

2.) You mention Alex's chest injury and say he was shot by and M82. If he was shot by a M82 or any .50 cal sniper rifle his entire pectoral region on that side of the body would definitely be gone and, thus, his arm would be gone too (and he would be 100% dead). If I remember correctly, I saw documentary about a soldier using the XM82A1 (X denotes that it was still being tested) in Iraq and it was stated that if you hit a person in the stomach with a .50 cal its possible that the person is literally split in a transverse section leaving their body in 2 pieces. I'm pretty sure, in the books, Alex was hit by a 7.62 round from a Dragunov sniper rifle, but I do not exactly remember. It has been like 8 years or so since I read Scorpia.

And for the love of god, let Sab and Alex get together by the end of this. :P

Its on her ao3 fic /mNDYNxcP

When do you update?

where can i sign the petition ?

I like your story and plot
Stay safe

Aaahh, Yassen Gregrovich is in action! This is such a cliffhanger and i can't wait for the next chapter

Your writing is brilliant, you’ve managed to write in detail without making it boring. I love the way you’ve written the characters and honestly I’ve never though of Alex as bi but now you mention it I get those vibes.
Can’t say I wasn’t expecting the Yassen Gregorovich twist because let’s be honest he never should of died.
Just read Nightshade and also noticed the mistaken, thought I was tripping out at first.
I’m really hoping the Alex rider tv series is on Netflix and that it’s gets released this year although I highly doubt it.
Seriously keep writing, living for this story.
(Why the fuck does everyone have a crush on Alex in this fanfic, seriously back off)

Sorry for the previous review, it was for another book.
Now the good review.

Great chapter as always. I am so curious how Alex is coming back from the kidnapping. And the reactions from Anatolievich.