Lovely chapter

Curious to see more and hoping you're safe.

Quite nice chapter

First thing, amazing job with your story I have been greatly enjoying seeing Luffy mess with the timeline. Second, considering your idea at the end. I say go for it since I love a good reaction fic and seeing their reactions to Luffy would be amazing. Finally if your taking ideas for possible nakama members than can I suggest Sly Cooper or a Sly inspired character. I figure having a sarcastic thief/magic user (since the Cooper clan can use at least a little magic in game) on the crew would add some diversity in the crews skill set and give you a chance to put down the rules on how magic is used in the world or just make a few comedic moments based around a thief that can turn invisible at will (I can see them having a field day messing with people like Glimmer.). Anyway it's your story so do whatever you want I just thought I'd throw in my own spur of the moment idea while it was fresh in my mind.

So others from the O.P world could be on Etheria too, since this shows that Do Flamingo is there

I really want to real more. Hope you update soon.

Hahahah. This is great. I love you care free and oblivious Luffy a character is

Pretty interesting

Garbage. Your spelling and grammar are horrible. Also none of the other S.H crew will appear.

Lol. That backfired

Nice and funny chapter, can't wait for his new fights. Trough, i'm not sure about the reboot's level of power(i've to see it yet), but you do know how fucking powerful was the original He- Man? No way Luffy can stand up to similar monsters.

I like the premise of this story. I know you said you were lazy, but you could maybe get an editor to help fix some of the grammar mistakes. Though I won't hold much against you since french is your first language.

Actualiza men quiero otro capítulo por favor
Tienes una buena historia

Adora should join the rebellion and have OC in the horde.

I like this