When indeed.

This fic is bloody brilliant.
I love it and I literally can't wait to read more.
Please post more soon

Really love this and I hope that the next chapter comes out soon.

thanks for the new upload

Very nice. Loved it

I like your writing. Ignore the naysayers

Awesome! please update it soon!

Ok, so after reading some of the reviews, I thought the grammar would be decent at best and the flow of the story to feel natural. However, the grammar is distractingly poor which is in desperate need of fixing. Plus, the story reads like a summery which feels entirely lazy and badly done.

Although despite these glaring flaws, it’s not total garbage. Still, I hoped that you would’ve went back to re-editing the chapters after receiving similar criticisms. To find out that wasn’t the case was disappointing.

Though I do hope you fix these issues as you learn more.

People are idiots if they think this is a shit story
1 it’s a story idea I’ve never seen before:Tytos is main character/ self insert
2 great story conflicts and development
3 good grammar and spelling

Tumbleton is in the reach. How exactly will the trade move from there to the red fork and then arrive at salt pans which is at the start of the bay of crabs? Fix it

Nice chapter, good work.

So now it won't be Tywin who will be heir to the rock but this Tybolt. This will change things significantly. I wonder what will Tytos do with Tymbolt. Since he is the official heir he will have to groom him for the position. Maybe he can have his son sent to Kingslanding to learn there and make connections.

Oh yeah that one is a petyr baelish type alright. I hope tytos doesn't fall for it. And I wonder if the rat was maybe a riverlander. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Woot woot go Tytos!
Your storytelling is more of a summary at the moment. Maybe you are building towards cannon, but his rise as Lord of Lannister is a fascinating tale. You missed a great opportunity to write about meeting the lords, the way to call the banners. I miss the nitty gritty, I suppose. I enjoy the tale, but wish it were more detailed

If it's morning and the staff are waking, it's more likely for everyone to be preparing to break their fast. Not supper. Little detail I noticed.

Not going to continue but good luck.

I am glad too. Great Story Keep going