Cool. I half expected beeshiping but not every RWBY fan is a fanatic I'm reminded.

Oh my god it was so bitter sweet I hope you write a sequel showing if they do get into more trouble or if Blake accepts family life. I love how you actually remembered that Blake wouldn't like it, it almost adds a new look at Blakes character! I wonder what story you're gonna make now...

This was unusual and fun. Hope you can finish more big stories, they have more to enjoy than one-shots.

how do you always write such awesome fucking stories? like you are a god when it to these. plz make more.

This was an amazing story! I would have liked more flash backs but still loved it!

That is far too much synthetic Drama for me! Why is it that the further the Story progresses the Charakters do more and more stupid thing?!

For Vales undergeound Boss Cinder has very few Personal! And seriously why didint they take more man to the exchange? There were a lot of stupid decisions on Cinder side and Adam luckout if Cinders man werent as incompetent as they are he would be already Dead!

Absolutely magnificent. I'll admit, I don't usually like modern AU's of RWBY, but this one blew me out of the water with how much I liked it. Congrats on writing an awesome fic, and I cannot wait to see what you write next!

Nice ending. I enjoyed your story quite a bit.

If you ever wanted to expand it, it would be cool to see Yang grow into a detective or cop and have some cooperation between the sisters when a bigger threat hits Vale. Somehow Weiss would need to be introduced and eventually join the team. Perhaps Mr. Schnee trying to corner the dust...um...ammunition market and sway loyalties?

Also, it was cute seeing a story where Emerald gets a happy ending with Cinder. Very sweet.

Loved the story. Mamma cinder aus are hard, but you did better than I could have ever hoped for

This was a great story that you have written. I can't wait to read what you write next for the RWBY fandom

Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work.

10 broken ribs, plus five times whatever else is in the medical report. I'm not 100% sure Adam would even survive that much.

Kinda hoping you ain't gonna skip over what happens to Adam. I mean, given that Ember already killed two people I at least expect them to not foolishly leave him alive after some thorough payback.
Looking forward to that last chapter.

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