Your oc made me lose interest

YAY ZARYUSU AND ZENBURU have mande an appearances and they are Ordo Malleus. Amazing.

Love it

No, no, no! Absolutely no spoilers plz. I love ur story and want to read it as it unfolds with time.

Thank you very much
May you have a great day

Amazing job!

There is hell, but its there heaven also?

Nice chapter, although i have one question. Not sure if it was a slight but during the discussion held between everyone about abyss material, you wrote that only Maeve is able to wield the dagger because she was a child/creation of Momonga and had his essence in her veins which made her the only being capable of using the abyss as a weapon

However, that is not true right? Pandora's actor is also a creation of Momonga who was born of his powers just like Maeve whoch is why they refer to each other as siblings. This means that even he could wield the dagger if he so wanted. I'm assuming you want the denizens of Nazarick to remain a secret which is why you made Maeve say that only she could wield it so they could remain a secret until further notice.

Anyways, it was just to know if it was intended or simply a slight. Great chapter and can't wait to see an epic battle.

Dude the chapter was logical and insanity mixed
Hope your next chapter comes soon
And a question ?
What about city state alliance? Never mentioned them.

I got the vibe of Lord of The Rings and DC/Marvel

Your world-building is incredible. Although I am looking forward to when the action starts...especially concerning what happens to Neia. 30 pages though, wow *.*

Dude, I swear I would quit writing if you deny you're a chemist. The amount of chemistry-related stuff in describing the forge world of mars was overwhelming. It was very well-written. Good job! Can't wait for the next chaps!

What about city state alliance

Dude I have read many tantric but this is the best so far. There is another writer that guy has written 3 volumes and as we know he hasn't posted anything for about 6 month I wish you don't stop. All the best .

Wow, I didn’t think I could despise and hate Remedios any more, but you proved me wrong. Can‘t wait for the next chapter

I really like this story, hope to see more of Neia soon, wondering what you‘re planing for her. Also I see you have great taste in music

I like this. Especially the conversation between the supreme beings. What I do have to point out is that with Sauerkraut with Schnitzel is not the greatest combination.