Reviews for Qrowin: Fate
Nina Vale chapter 11 . 10/12/2019
adorable. and yeah, Winter has loved Qrow, and cared about him and I think the love for Tai was her subconsciously trying to 'move on' from someone she thought might not have feelings for her. And maybe a bit of fascination like Eowin had with Aragorn. She loved the adventure and wide world she saw in Strider. But then she found someone she truly fell for.
The ending with kids was sweet. Qrow is such a family man.
Nina Vale chapter 10 . 10/12/2019
awww this is so cute. Winter did need her friends to open her eyes to the pining XD. and to her own feelings for him.
Nina Vale chapter 9 . 9/2/2019
ermm, Winter why is it wrong to be in love with him? I mean yeah, he's your friend but that's like...first qualification XD and secondly, you had a crush on him before as a kid. Doesn't mean it's childish to be in love with your friend. Tai technically was your friend too. and Yang is cute and family is everything to Qrow. Again, wonder how you'll deal with Ruby and everything. is there going to be...polyamory where Raven and Tai both marry Summer and decide upon second kid, or is it more canon that Raven suddenly wooshes away? My first thought in the second scenario is that Qrow might to self-sacrificing bs again and try to get Winter and Tai together again because he's sure she's still crushing on the guy and now she can be with him like it was always meant to be.
Nina Vale chapter 8 . 8/17/2019
Oh...Winter still sticking to that? Seriously the boy's head over heels in love with you still *shakes head*. Poor, flustered little bird. and Yang is about to enter the scene, huh? I wonder...since I've got impression Branwen twins are not from the tribe in this one(or were they adopted by someone, after being taken from there?) how is this going to go with Summer and Ruby? I can't see Tai cheating on Raven so is this...never gonna happen or is Raven going to leave him soon to become a bandit or just run away? I'm curious how this one is going to play out and if Qrow is going to do something idiotic like trying to pair Winter with Tai when he's single again. Because they're supposed to be or something like that? Or is Winter going to hide, out of embarrassment and confused feelings for Qrow and find out Raven's gone after she received an invitation to next wedding? Or to Summer's funeral or in some other way finds out about the new arrangements by finding out Tai has two little kids by two different women and both are gone? and Qrow is a total mess trying to keep everyone together while Tai is locked up in his room? I'm so, so curious about it.
This was a very good chapter. I could so see Winter looking out into the Atlas and Qrow being waay too chipper and way to hyper for it to be natural at seeing her. Idk for me it seemed like he's super nervous and tries to act as if he's not hurting still and as if nothing has happened. Tries waay to hard. Keep up the good work and I hope to see next chapter soon!
jensen6 chapter 8 . 8/16/2019
I like this story. Keep up the good work.
Nina Vale chapter 7 . 8/2/2019
this hurt. Poor Winter, she was hopeful like any girl in love, saw Tai smiling and saying he feels exactly the same way, that he loves her but he didn't. It always hurts...and Qrow was there for her but him knowing hurt her too...I mean I get that he should've told her, but then again...he didn't want to hurt her and kill her hope. Poor things.
MadTitan9 chapter 7 . 8/2/2019
Boy, that escalated quickly...
Nina Vale chapter 6 . 7/29/2019
Oh dear...he has got it really bad. I'm a sucker for this kind of romantic musings though. Qrow is a true romantic, and probably read too much of Remnant's equivalent of Byron, Austen and Goethe. Makes me think of Persuasion Letter though. a bit.
I can listen no longer in silence. I must speak to you by such means as are within my reach. You pierce my soul. I am half agony, half hope. (...)Dare not say that man forgets sooner than woman, that his love has an earlier death. I have loved none but you.(...)For you alone, I think and plan. Have you not seen this? Can you fail to have understood my wishes? I had not waited even these ten days, could I have read your feelings, as I think you must have penetrated mine. I can hardly write. I am every instant hearing something which overpowers me. You sink your voice, but I can distinguish the tones of that voice when they would be lost on others. Too good, too excellent creature!
Alternatively She doesn't see me by A-1 from Asterix and Obleix: Mission Cesar
drunkdragon chapter 5 . 7/24/2019
ahhhhh winter is slowly awakening to it 3

I wish the chapters were a little bit longer, but at the same time the pacing is also perfect so it's hard to say lol. Great work so far!
Nina Vale chapter 5 . 7/21/2019
Poor Winter...she still loves him deep down, but she doesn't know it or isn't ready to recognize it yet. But she is Jelous of Summer...this is only going to get more complicated...oh love, love why can't it ever be easy
readyssornot chapter 5 . 7/21/2019
Oh Winter... be positive and brave to face what you really love!
Nina Vale chapter 4 . 7/17/2019
Poor bird, he tries so hard. Bless his noble heart. I mean he tried to set her up with Tai and heck probably would be best man at their wedding, blathering about how wonderful true love is while his heart breaks or something. He even tried to convince Tai to give her a chance, because he might end up liking her. Like, really he could've dropped it and rejoice Tai doesn't like her, but he is sad on her behalf, and still tried to make Tai like her. Because she loves Tai and therefore should be loved back because this is how things are supposed to be. The best girl and the best guy. Like in a movie. But nope. Poor Qrow...really I do hope Winter changes her mind. I mean there is nowhere she will get with Tai and with how pissed Raven is, she'd now go out with Tai just to bring the point home.
readyssornot chapter 4 . 7/16/2019
I’m with Tai, I truly believe the one who Winter fell in love is Qrow haha!
bunchofstories chapter 4 . 7/16/2019
cool I love sobbing
Nina Vale chapter 3 . 7/14/2019
Just a little...yeah. and I do like your take on Raven as the older sister who is salty and angry on her brother's behalf and protective of his feelings.
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