I wonder if Scathach could reach the Shadow world?

Reading this story again, and it just hit me that Yukiko probably knows that Shirou and Rin are in a threesom relationship with Saber, given that Rin booked the springs for them. This makes her interaction with them make more sense

I don't know jack about Persona, but I've really enjoyed this so far. Pacing is stellar and everyone feels believable.

yup, still awesome. really looking forward to those updates now.

okay, now I understand a whole lot more. I was always confused about the gas station attendant, but now after you mentioned it I did a quick google search and now it makes a whole lot more sense. amazing story so far and I'm looking forward to the rest.

Awesome,
can't wait for the next chapter.

Can’t wait for the next chapter not long until it gets going :)

nice to see this story again. Looking forward to more :)

"We're new here, do you think you could tell us where the reduced section is?"

Reduced section?
Xxxx
Do you mean Produce?

And how long will you have people keep calling Saber, Saber?
Thinking about it now it is something that should be considered a weird name. It'd be just weird to have be someone around town only known as Beserker or Assassin.

At least Saber will keep busy without having to be a student it seems. Wonder what she will do though.

So much time dancing around the P4 startline. Its gonna happen next a t last!

Didn't think it'd be this many chapters.

I think Yu is Izanagi reincarnation, izanami just like gender Bender yu

Hmm..., via power scaling persona user is stronger than most magus and servant, even saber with full power will have hard time fighting Adachi alone, Adachi is on universal-multiversal level while saber just Continent level.
The weakness that persona user have is they cant summon persona in real world without evoker or proper training.

I hope shirou team get persona too.

Anyway good story

Witdog,

When it comes to Genre Fiction, Literature, poems, or any kind of creative writing, more liberties are given to the creator of the content. Grammar rules, paragraph placements, sentence structure, etc, are all more fluid. An example of this is the classic "Huckleberry Finn" where many of the characters spoke in their regional dialect. Grammatically speaking, the way they spoke (i.e. the way their speech was written) was absolutely incorrect. In any other type of work, such as an essay, it should've been proofread and corrected. However, it was in a work that is considered creative writing, therefore the author was given leeway to do it as it was done on purpose and not by accident.

Now, that's for grammar, which is one of the things that people tend to focus on the most when correcting and proofreading. I assure you, when it comes to structure in writing, authors are given just as much freedom to be creative in their works. As long as it was done on purpose, we can only assume that it is the "style" that the author has chosen to write in. We may or may not like it, but it's their choice.

My apologies if I offend you, I assure you I'm not trying to do anything of the sort, I'm just putting it out there that the way the writer is currently doing it is not inherently wrong but a stylistic choice.

Alright, the story's getting going! Can't wait to see what Shirou and Ron make of shadows! (I also can't wait to see Saber's personal shadow and how she would react to it, lol).

If Saber's shadow became a persona, what would it be? I will die laughing if it turned out to be Arthur Pendragon (male) or Mordred (male or female)

Letting a lot out there more than I expected.
Probably won't affect much but a bit surprising to see.

Slow going.