Reviews for slimeling evolution unseen
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2019
If your cannot properly speak English yet take some more classes. And not to sound rude but if you naturally speak English.. please learn proper grammar.
Have a Little Feith chapter 2 . 7/31/2019
This could use a lot of editing. Don't get me wrong, it's decent, but not all that good, in terms of mistakes made. For instance, you typed "Riley", instead of "Really", and "Wired" instead of "Weird". And that's not even getting into the fact that you didn't capitalize the start of every sentence. Lemme guess, you wrote this on an android phone? Because it's super short, as well. An average of about 450 words per chapter. I mean, you have a decent start, but this could do with a bit more fleshing out, with plenty of details.
death comes chapter 1 . 7/8/2019
Write it again and check it before publishing so your codes dont show
deathwearsblack chapter 2 . 7/8/2019
thank you for update.
nextss6 chapter 1 . 7/8/2019
Hey u got a whole bunch on computer error stuff in your text plz fix its almost impossible to read