Reviews for Rising of the Shield and Spirit Hero
poreytor chapter 6 . 9h
jajaja o no I just read the title of victim of zelretch jajaja that is a good one title
poreytor chapter 6 . 9h
when I see the dating sim system I questioned myself... what would happen if there were all boys... i only can say I'm glad that that will not happen to me
megadragon135 chapter 17 . 6/2
Do the FOURTH! option please.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25
Please stop writing fan fiction. This is awful
LMaltez chapter 17 . 5/23
The 4th path seems the most interesting of all... Frankly, I would not truly read about the others paths at all.
guo222 chapter 17 . 5/16
1th path
xXReiHideoHiwatariXx chapter 17 . 5/15
4th path
Sandshrew master 317 chapter 17 . 5/6
Ok I think path 1 and harem should be no bigger then 5 that way each girl could be give enough development and focus that it feels balanced
Knightoftheice chapter 17 . 5/4
Any of the first three paths and atla is in your haren.
Kuryogami01011 chapter 17 . 5/1
Firstly, thanks for the chapter.

Second, why the OC or the brother of shield hero naofumi iwatani is cane hero when he got heroic spirit card? Isn't it better for the OC getting card hero/card user?

Third, in the first place the cross over is shield hero and spirit hero card from fate series and then you adding too many character from crossover anime, novels, manga etc... without the detailed in-depth or so is say why the crossover chara in there in shield hero world, what make the crossover chara there, what is the reason the crossover other than hating the king/trash, the beach princess, the hidden scheme by arc bishop bicus?

Forth, I chose to combine the option 3 as intro and then using the option 1 as back story and the progress the OC "101 way how to become OP, even the Idiot can do it"

Lastly, (you can ignore this comment or my prespective after reading your story) if this FFN (fan fiction novels) is going to be remake or rewriten, well let's say I make the choice you offer, will you always including or adding too many crossover chara and make them just like sidekick character with a few or too many POV in the story and ended as "I want to make all the heroine in my favorite loving my OC (exsist or not in the world OC is transported) as OC Harem's and I want to make the villain I hate is feeling the worse more than being punished in jail, being putting in hell, or being lost in Limbo"?

Because at first the story has potential of interesting story of shield hero and fate kaleid/fate series combined, but then some and many crossover chara with underline GIRLS, WOMEN from different novels, different anime/game is forced to exsist to be OC harem's without reasonable reason/purpose they are exsist in that world. Are you sure YOU or the OC or SELF INSERTED hating the rapist?, hating being kidnaped to different world?, hating being forced to do something?, why do I feel adding so many crossover chara out of knowhere feels like kidnaping them just to make pairing problem solved and for the long run problem the victim falling in love for the kidnaper, having sex with the OC, having the children with the OC and happy ever true good ending?

Sorry for using harsh word, making you hating me, and too long rant or comment or review to you. I know how hard to make the story, even myself doesn't have the convidence my story will be liked or getting soo many harsh review or cursed. so keep progressing forward take whatever you need and face it head on.
ALICE chapter 17 . 5/1
Hey king i say four for the simple reason having shit taste and liking when a isekai is in about a adult in a kids body and king did you get your sieg yet?
Vasukiev chapter 17 . 5/1
Fourth, would be a very interesting spin that I’d like to see.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/24
Stop writing this cringe shit
dragonden117 chapter 17 . 4/24
# 2
paradox0.5white chapter 17 . 4/24
Fourth
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