Oh god this has been a rollercoaster of fun and suspense. You have been amazing in your writing and I can't wait for the next chapter. Hans must die, but it won't be that easy, will it?
10/11

You son of a gun you actually did what I thought you were gonna do with Kana. You are an amazing writer that you should write a manga or something.
10/10

Another great chapter

Wow, that opening scene with Charlotte! Though it cuts away at the last second, her growls and roars are rich with sensuality!

It is so good to finally arrive at the battle against Hans ... although it doesn't seem as though it will be quite as straightforward as Keiji's company has expected. Just a speculation here, but I wonder if Hans is making do with a small company of press-ganged peasants because he has some sort of monster or beast providing his true firepower. Hmm...

Hot dang this was good! Loved it! But I am REALLY worried about this ominous omen... what could Keiji and the others feel that is so...WRONG? Hmm... Is it possible they’ve been duped?!

Hmm, so Keiji has activated some sort of hidden power granted to him by Nyx. Perhaps this is just what he needs to win the fight against Hans. Meanwhile, it sounds like Nyx's prophecies have direct implications for Charlotte, who's been ordered off the front lines. I'm still rooting for her to win Keiji's full devotion.

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Keiji what the fu-
5/5

Man! This was AWESOME!

I would like to see next chapter because I know Hans is coming Keiji is finally ready to take Hans down

This chapter's full of interesting tidbits. First, it answers a vital world-building question of "why can't healers just magic away all injuries and diseases?" It's the severity of the damage that determines the effectiveness of magic, and spells can actually stress or reopen a more common injury such as Keiji's sprained ankle.
Lastly, the shrine maiden who restored Felicia's sight was Keiji's mother! I wonder if she had stories to tell about her son or a message to empart, should Flora ever come in contact with him again.

I would like to see an illustration of Kana being saved by Keiji

I know nothing like this has actually happend yet, but I'd love to see a picture of Corrin, Kana and Keiji reuniting. If it has to already of happened, then maybe one of Keiji amd Kagero confronting each other in the woods.

Awesome work! Loved this! Well done.

Would you be able to do another flashback, one of when Ryoma assigns Keiji to Corrin. I'd really pike to read that but we obviously won't be seeing it in Night with Hana.

I wonder if Kagero will keep trying or report to Ryoma.