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   LionComet chapter 5 . 8/5/2019 Oobleck out of nowhere... thanks for the chapter |
| ParadoxReader chapter 4 . 8/4/2019 Be interesting to see how this all continues and for all of it to connect later on... Especially to RWBY... HOPE His party be JNPR cause i love their family dynamic and the B team or underdogs are always my favourite haha... Ps don't over dramatise and make blake a tragic heroime cause even nora qualify more... Smilling while suffering... A street rat who only have ren left... Help by her fearless leader who she might always say that to motivate jaune and perhaps inspired by him when zhe know he is scared the most but still stand in front and move forward when they need him... And hppe Pyrrha will with Jaune hehe cause cannon don't let it happen but with a twist where she is actually after jaune dated and lost someone else... That would be interesting cause rarely done... And make sense of why jaune don't want to accept pryhha advances at first... But also secretly all JNPR is protective with jaune cause he is the only auraless person in their group while ruby goes overprotective to the point jaune gets annoyed and the rest of RWBY goes condescending without kind of realising it despite their first meeting is him saving their ass |
| Guest9521 chapter 3 . 7/28/2019 I love Ys! This has been great so far and I hope you continue |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/22/2019 Will Jaune be the same as Adol "The man that never scored", "Boat's Bane", "Waifu Stealer" and so on and so forth? |
| N-Lorin chapter 1 . 7/22/2019 Hell yes, I love Ys. This is a crossover I didn't realize I wanted until I saw it. How many of the games are you planning to cover? |
| LionComet chapter 3 . 7/22/2019 Had to login to repost this... Will Jaune experience the same things that happens with Adol? Will he be remembered the same way like "Boat's Bane" or "The man who never scores" or "Waifu stealer" or "Loose all important items and start a new Adventure"... I liked the Ys series not sure on how much you will shove Jaune in as far as possible without aura... |
| LionComet chapter 1 . 7/22/2019 Had to login to repost this... Will Jaune experience the same things that happens with Adol? Will he be remembered the same way like "Boat's Bane" or "The man who never scores" or "Waifu stealer" or "Loose all important items and start a new Adventure"... I liked the Ys series not sure on how much you will shove Jaune in as far as possible without aura... |
| EiNyx chapter 2 . 7/15/2019 Oh, you mean the Ys series - as in the JRPG series. I'd really recommend not referring capitalizing both letters as it's not an acronym. That's going to confuse a LOT of people. |
| ImHellaUgly chapter 2 . 7/15/2019 what sword did he level at the evil nigga, I can't tell if I'm missing something or nah but didn't he not find crocea mors |
| crasyadis chapter 1 . 7/10/2019 hmm interesting, but what exactly do you mean by YS? |
| The stranger 2003 chapter 1 . 7/8/2019 Pumped for this story. |
| the-lost-memories6 chapter 1 . 7/7/2019 Hmm interesting |
| JustManySue chapter 1 . 7/7/2019 Great ! |
| toniyepes chapter 1 . 7/7/2019 No sé si sepas español pero me gustó tu historia espero el segundo episodio suerte Saludos |
