are you done with this story

So far this feels less like a story and something else I can’t remember the name of it, and I can’t be bothered to remember it. That stated I quite like what I’ve read. Ah it’s like a list of what they have done and who is doing what at a single moment with no real story. I like how not crakeish the story feels. The oc house is quite funny with the conversations (I guess you would call them at the end of chapter 4). I like to see for of a story of the oc house. Now I just have to wait to see if there is an update for this story soon.

chapter 3 and 4 what exactly happened? You just jumped making no sense at all.

Im lovin this. Same as the other one

Lovely. Interesting story, a question.. Is there no interaction between belmont and blackwood? I think they can be easily persuaded to migrate to North because of constant harassment from bracken

This is a really cool idea, and I can tell you’ve put a lot of thought into this. However, there isn’t really a story, with characters and a plot. For me, that makes it a little difficult to read. What you have here would make a really interesting AU, no matter what time you set the story in.

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I'm running out of patience," Maegor Belmont cody says. " Either you surrender the men to justice immediately...or by tomorrow, I will burn Sept of Remembrance to the ground "

Everyone who just heard what Maegor was horrified by his words.

"You wouldn't dare!" the High Septon retorted shocking.

"Oh I dare," Maegor sneered. "I'm a Belmont remember? The Devils that you kept telling everyone about. "

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"I'm running out of patience ,"

The north wouldnt have hated them for being from the south. That didnt really happen until the andals took over and then the differences became to large and the division set in. Especially if the North wasnt even united. People from the starks kingdom would probably have hated the Boltons and their lords more than anyone from the south (as long as they hadnt been involed in fights with them like the iron born)Also i think the Red Kings were already defeated by the time the Andals invaded, the north at the very least, i tjink anyway.

With the belmonts being descendants of the last hero would the followers of r'hllor be some sort of aware of this fact with r'hllor showing visions guiding his flowers to the belmonts and with the prince that was promised prophecy would it meant for belmonts than the targaryen and that jaehaerys second thought it meant his family
Also I have to wonder what did jaehaerys do to the belmonts
And would we be see any more children of the forest in other chapters like if egg was to tell Alaric about the woods witch prophecy Alaric could go to the children and ask what they know about the prophecy and the witch
Great chapter hope to see more

Nice thxfU

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"If you want to kill my brother and my husband,"Visenya Targaryen told William Belmont with steel-like tone in her voice. "You'll have to kill me first...and that will never happen in a thousand years."

William stare at her for a moment. Yet for him, a moment sound like an eternity. The sight of Visenya Targaryen was enough to inflame him passionately. She was everything he wanted for wife: beautiful, voluptuous, tall, sensual, intelligent but also fearless, adept, cunning, dangerous, and tough. Part of him regret he had to kill her in order to protect the North.

"I don't like killing ladies," William responded. "However, ladies don't carry around swords in hand...which will make it easier for me to kill you since you are not a lady."

"Don't get ahead of yourself!" Visenya warned. "You may have defeated Aegon in sword fight, but of the three Targaryen, I'm regarded as the most deadliest of sword fighters. "

"I'm not your brother," William shot back. "And if you want to prove you're the best of the three...then let's not waste words."

I think I might see the reason why Visenya Targaryen left her husband brother for William Belmont.

Though beautiful, skilled in battle and fierce, Visenya was somewhat stand-offish in matters of the heart. Aegon allegedly spent only one night with her for every ten he spent with Rhaenys.

After Rhaenys' death Visenya's relationship with Aegon, which had never been a warm one, grew more distant. When Aegon had the Aegonfort torn down so they could start building the Red Keep, Visenya was left in charge of the construction. Yet it was suggested in court that Aegon had left Visenya at King's Landing so that he would not have to endure her presence on Dragonstone.

William must saw something or touch something in Visenya that Aegon didn't. Something that made Visenya so happy for the first time in her life, it motive her to leave Aegon to be with William.

More trees thanks to the children? maybe made some children survive in their land?
or even marry one of Lords?

When the knight orders joined the belmonts did this cause any problems for the tyrells and the baratheons with the belmonts having more rights to strom end and highgarden
And the Leader of the order of the green hand could say that the tyrells betrayed there kings to gain power and could not be trusted by doing this it could damage the tyrells control of the reach with many of the reach houses not trusting them
And could there be a si:7 or a assassin/spy guild That was created by the belmonts to protect the north and starks from the shadows with them beging something pepole where not sure if they where real or not and with them gathering information or killing any one that could pose a threat in the future
Great chapter hope to see more