Love this! Could picture everything so clearly. Felt like watching an episode.

Well done ! When I hear fireworks I always think that some people might not find them much fun. That was a really interesting starting point. Thanks for posting !

Good story. I like it.

Good think Mac knows Jack so well and this was just a mild flashback. Even better they are back on track with each. So even with Jack gone for a bit nothing can break up there friendship.

On a different site this would be a quick "kudos". It fits the charecter, the setting and everything else. Liked it, but I've read other stuff you' be done.

Love your story! Perfect depiction of their flashbacks given the fireworks. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.