Great chapter! Newkirk has his team all ready to WIN! Please update/finish this story! I can't wait to hear all about the game, and the mission! Thanks!

Goldman...You did me proud!

If Newkirk is this exhausted, it's not safe for him to go out on another mission. Same goes for Hogan. But, Hogan knows better than me. Hope it doesn't affect their mission.

Oh the drama and the suspense! What a cliffhanger! Totally loving it!

I LOVE the last line of the chapter. I don't want to give it away, but it speaks volumes.

That female is such a bad thing! She keeps making women look bad! Not surprised that she is a killer! I hope she gets swift and appropriate justice! She deserves it! However Frau Weber, who was their nanny, and has shown she is a far better woman. She deserves a more appropriate justice to what her level of crime has been, which seems to be very low.

Thank you for showing women can be very different. Most women are not as bad as Nightjar. She is a special kind of BAD. The variety makes your story more life-like and real.

Kinch is a WONDEFUL man, and a WONDERFUl big brother. He understood what Newkirk was going through, and explained that to him. Now, Newkirk doesn't feel alone or isolated. He feels the full support of Kinch and the other men.

Wonderful chapter! I love how Carter and Newkirk discuss their communication problems; they have opposite problems, but now can relate to each-other better. They have each-others backs and will always take care of each-other..as the brothers they now are!

There are good people on both sides and bad people on both sides. It's nice to see them interact with GOOD German guards.

"potatoes in my ears"...then Hogan said "I think we all heard that one growing up." This gave me a flashback to when they were all children. Can you imagine? It would be such a FUN story. I wonder if anyone has done a story about that or an alternative universe story where they regress back to childhood.

he-he! MEN! Good to know that Newkirk's family jewels are bruised but will be okay. LOL! It's funny how sensitive men are about them..I don't mean physically. The exchange between Newkirk and Wilson was GREAT! "No joy for two days." ha-ha! I don't know if Newkirk will be able to last! What will he do with his hands for that long?

Hogan creates a plan to help Newkirk with his stuttering and ends up getting Volunteered himself for a whole different activity! HA!

I love how close this group of men are! They started out different men from different countries, and they are now a close, loving family. They take care of each-other even when one suffers from something that the rest don't understand. Yet, they all try to understand Newkirk's stuttering. And none of them judge him for it.

Again, those two females are BAD! They give women a bad name! grrrr! I was glad that Frau Weber wanted Lorelei to apologize to Newkirk; that shows the difference between her and the two other women. And don't get me started on Captain Leitner. Booo!

LeBeau needs to be a little more patient with Newkirk because of his stutter..there is less pressure to talk with strangers than family/friends, because you're trying sooooo hard NOT to stutter around them, that you do stutter MORE.

Lots of quick thinking makes this chapter fun and successful for the gang! Poor Newkirk! He saved the group only to be...OUCH!

I forgot to write last chapter that it was sooo cool about their German names-especially Carter's!

oh nooo...those women are trouble, trouble, trouble! They should be shot on SIGHT!

Exciting adventure...loving it!