| Reviews for The Monster Behind that Smile |
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Nimmy Ju chapter 1 . 8/7/2019 Chapter 5 is the wrong chapter u upload it to the right one though |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/18/2019 I honestly don't know what to say. I don't usually review (hence no account) but I just wanted you to know that I appreciate the story. I'm glad I have it a chance. Frankly, my knowledge of Inazuma Eleven is abysmal but I saw this story and thought why not read it. Good decision. I like Xene/Xavier and his perspective. He is very much an OP character with his alien enhancements and intellect. I hope you can continue to flesh out his character and show more sides to him besides his intelligence. In the next chapter, you are planning on introducing his dynamic with the rest of the team (besides the wow you are really good at soccer); I am excited to see what you plan to do next with Xene/Xavier as he doesn't seem like the type to enjoy the extra attention. Anyway, I just wanted to say thank you for the new story. |