It would not surprise me if Carla, Lucy, Cana and Gray get expelled from Fairy Tail for inadvertently sending one of their own to be captured and raped.

Not going to lie this was cringy as hell it feels like you where just brushing on characters just to bash on them like you didn't give any real reason to why they would feel the way they do and don't get me wrong I know this is fanfiction different universes and all that but the biggest thing was just Cara she just came out and was like I agree fuck Wendy it just seems way out of left field I'm not hate I'm just saying you should really go back and clean this chapter up give a reason for their opinions being the way it is and if you're going to make characters actor out you need to put that in your summary for the story so you attract last hate.

Wow you really did improve. This is almost like a whole new story. Keep up the amazing work!

Wow you really outdid yourself. Congrats! The added details on the incident of Wendy getting kicked out makes this much easier to follow..You really do have great potential and this story can really be great, just don't stress too much on it. You still need to enjoy the experience!
Very much looking forward to the next Chapter!