I want more stories like this, please continue and keep up the good work.

Wow nice story bro. Jeep up the good work

Hmm, a nice story so far I gotta wonder what's next anyways keep up the great work!

really fun chapter

Yay! was looking forward to this

Oh, look, another fic that turns Naruto into a bad copy of Shippuden Sasuke.
This is nothing more but cringe bullshit.

Me encanto el cap valio la espera

love this story

But when you think about it Naruto has become the natural predator for cinder. His abilities heavily revolve around ice, heaven forbid he unlocks Hyorinmaru's ultimate ability used in the war between aizen and soul society.

That crazy AOE skill that froze everything the snow touched.

well that was a fun read, keep up the great work.

Wait, I thought he had orange hair not blond?

okay now I'm quite confused about this chapter , is naruto weaker than phyrha in term of skills or in power, because there some sentences that indicated he overall doesn't on same level of phyrha but other sentences indicated he only less of her in term of abilities and skills

Naruto x Pyrrha for the win.

I had high hope for this story but it fell flat. The idea was nice but the execution could be better. For one the integration of power is poor. like really poor. What happen to Narutos chakra? why is he always using Kuramas own? what of actual swordmans skill? what did Naruto spend over 4 years doing? why is Hyorinmaru still in a terrible state before Shikai use? it is supposed to be permanently transformed into at least a new sword use. it's not meant to be alternating between terrible form and new form. what about Naruto's shinobi skills? Hyorinmaru literally said he and Kumara was gonna teach Naruto and 3 years later no improvement. You said He learnt kiddo but seems like He literally just learnt one of the most basic one during this fight. And his fight with Weiss is just disappointing. I just expected more

I haven’t commented on any fics in quite a while but I felt it was right to comment here. This Fic is seriously under rated for this crossover and I wanted to boost its review fav and follow counts a bit.