like i said earlier today i love your story cant wait for the end i wonder if any of the girls will confess to naruto the cloest one was piper surpisingly hope its silena or annabeth since bianca trapped in the hotel he just meet thaila before he left to join the quest zoe is a hunter and piper back home.

years of PJO stories under my belt and this is the first time ive seen god of wHine LMFAO

Two big notes in this chapter. First, Naruto's jealousy when annabeth is tending to an injured percy is a bit creepy. They just met, ya know? It seems a tad possessive. I'd have added something like that the first time a boy flirted with her or Selena. He's not used to having other guys around of course.

Second, the campers have no way of knowing apollo hasn't had any other children. Part of themselves was still in that world even when their other selves were in Naruto's world. If he hadn't had kids in all that time it would have been far more than twelve years. Given that, and the fact that children don't usually start being detected but monsters until they are at least 8 or so, and that's only for the more powerful gods, then by my math there should only be a four or five year gap between naruto coming and the youngest sibling. In the time Naruto grew up, the part of apollo that stayed around and had more kids would've had them attending. So, assuming he had one that wad within its first year of life and started stemming at eight then they only would think he hadn't had a child in four years or so. Now, when a child doesn't show up after Naruto for a good eight years or more they might get curious.

love the fanfiction, cant wait for the next update.

Just a quick note here. Around your point where you introduce zoe you made a mistake. You actually put that all her hunters were teenagers. It's not a big deal if that's something you're changing for your story but you mention chloe joining the hunt at 8 several paragraphs later. I believe in the book it states that Artemis usually maintained a child form of 10-12 because that was the average age of her hunters.

I'm enjoying your development here. The Hades scene was really good. I do wish you'd do a bit more editing before posting though.

Lastly, and I really just want to plead with you here before it gets too far. Please don't make this a harem. He's a son of Artemis and was raised in the hunt for goodness sake. It makes zero sense. He'd never want to be like one of those guys who hurt them. And Zoe, do you really think she'd be in a harem. She had enough trouble with men after Hercules. It will ruin your story, please don't do it. If he was just a son if Apollo then that would be one thing. No girl is ever just okay with sharing a guy. You're sorry isn't focused enough on romance to balance it either. Girls would get lost in the mix. Please consider the quality of your story. Even just two girls would be pushing it.

Great work! I hope you update soon!

Cerberus is just a big old sweetie pie! He just want to be like every other dog!

Great chapter

I guess growing up with Artemis as your mother has a effect on how you learn about dating

Ahh! The first date you go on could be special or horrible

Nice work!

Time to commence Operation: Sunmoon Disappear

I was wondering when the old fox would show up!

If I know Naruto he will sneak out when no ones looking or are all a sleep