I love this fic and, like I said earlier, am holding out hope for more

sirius was roger! that's both hilarious and sad.
love this story and will keep hoping beyond hope for more chapters

That is hilarious. So how is Ace going to act when he finds out his girlfriend was taken by the world government? Enies Lobby is about to see a rain of fire from a pissed off dragon.

So glad those two got together. They make a great couple.

Okay so just to clear up something. They are not gay and its just brotherly love right? Ace will have a girlfriend or at least get laid right?

Great story loved the theme and the mix of ace/Harry and Luffy in the chapters!

I love this story so much and would just love to read more of this. It has been just wow so far and I can't wait to see just what you are going to have happen next.

I really liked this and I hope you bring Harry in on the Enis Lobby arc.

please update soon

OMG i can't stop laughing XD please update even more!

I love this story with each chapter passing it makes me laugh i wish you could of made the alternative Ace, have fun with luffy

I love this story, I hope you update soon! The plot is pretty original and I like the alterations you made because of Harry's interventions
My only critic would be that you tend to write whole paragraphs of information again and again when something is explained to several people. I mean, usually for this kind of thing you can just write something like "They explained to [insert character name] the origin and pun behind Pyrite's name", rather than rewrite the full explanation everytime (reading the same thing thrice in as many chapters can be annoying).

I can't wait for more! :D

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

Doing great please write more

I cried a bit when I realized paddfoot was his dad in this life. now I wish they meet and realize they were both reincarnated and now father and son.