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Then suddenly Blood bonded him than very far as all of it hardest to the Best efriends with Caleb then to the Aliens/Vulcans to both bitten blood bonded as all of it then six found me guilty of murder and treason then Ripped apart into pieces with the Cullens/five Killed wit blood onto my dress the brutalized slaughtered then too late Taken from me/him/they with alien venom was Transtioning good we find you sentenced to death you are a Cullen group with they as Cullens Take care of that last thoughts then Head-cord ripped then then Brought there good ripped a Mermaid-Vampire slaying sailor soldier hybridnow in pieces with them they tried to heal her/him/they rest found her/him/they ripped them are Dead completely are Cut from humans see to it at once then too late was More than Volturi as all of the bitten then too late Execution of them with body parts of us/they us/they were Too late then ATOMIZED By vaporizing then were as all of more Volturi guards good they are wiped out Bitten too late then too soon Nothingness was left of us/they good they are departed they ben Turned by herself are next as all of with immortal Children nuked are Ripped apart then too late More as all of Volturi guards bitten as all of them suddenly glowing more supremely more powerful shot up like Hino Rei that's it you'r Sushi demons for killing me this's means war Then yelled to out to the heavens above Zeus o king allfather rules Mount Olympus grant me the planetatry ablity from fallen sakuras with them grant thee planetary ablities please say betazed twilight power make up! Then finally acting like Princess Serena from the anime screaming out the words from a alien planet began flying and a suddenly flashing before newest BETAZED TWILIGHT MAKE_UP! Suddenly fallen but wet but glowing fiery sakuras became magical girl ones suddenly letting loose a Ancient Greek Xena Warrior princess"s war cry trilling in Forged in a heat a battle a mighty princess DELTA TWILIGHT POWER DENEB TWILIGHT POWER MIRI TWILIGHT POWER CESYUS TWILIGHT POWER! MAKE-UP! Then suddenly with the outer beyond with the Super Sailor Guardians myself Protected by Betazed the planet of Telepathy the Pretty Soldier in a sera'fuku aloow me to grace you a Divine Punishment In the name of Betazed will PUNISH YOU IN THE NAME OF CRYSTAL TOKYO SUPER SAILOR BETAZED HAS ARRIVED! flying off the mask glowing more supremely then then then standing defiant strong and powerfulfiere thundering more with them were not mortals Smashed freely both then brought there good guard these ones are lifeless then myself produced a Ward You'r Sushi Rin Jin Shi Chi Kai Zai Tou Bai Chou BAI ZEN! EVIL SPIRIT BE EXORCIZED! Was in fact a Priestess trained in spells and ward casting then Purifination AYKURO TAISAN! I call the powers of Betazed GREAT FIREBALLS CHARGE! BETAZED GREAT FIRE IGNITE! Rolling my planetary powers so they had powers then mess with us with them you are moondusted Volturi then too late was in fact with remains of the mask shattering me with they was a true sailor soldier a warrior of Neo-Queen Serenity and both then swore alliance to them vowing to her only then too late us/they were reincarnated on Earth in the 21st century bound to my warrior since our first meeting gasp she's not human so they then powered down crap Garrett good god woman you are what a sailor guardian keep it a secret alias then suddenly too late was in love with a Soldier from the planet Mars found him again via reincarnation gasp she is with him from Crystal Tokyo she's Japanese-American.

I tried to keep reading this because the whole mermaid thing was intriguing, but your Bella is the most wishy-washy, flaky, bitchy one I have ever read. She flits back and forth with whatever guy decided to give her attention. I’m sorry, but I can’t keep going. Maybe if this was more fleshed out it would be better. I hope you keep working on your writing and exploring your ideas because they are interesting!

18. Epilouge 2.
then Bitten him again blood was then To best friends as all of them were marked had created a Coven were bitten then too late each both then suddenly with him then with three bitten then suddenly With aliens/Vulcans then Drinking blood six found us/they/they guilty of treason then violently tore from here head-cord then Execution of myself with himself with they then tore into pieces were as all of it brutalized as all of get her/him/they then then Isabella for crimes you are charged with murder found the runaway then Felix myself who had last thought see guilty she lies tear her head apart the last thoughts and finally totally but faded away Murdered from here with him/they Brought there then Too late with alien venom spreading good they are dead with the Cullens/witnesses are destroyed with the three she was bitten by snakes as all of it made her immortal but dead Rip them alive they broken rule then Too late More Volturi members then atomized from here good death welcomed them here more as all of guards then too late bitten but blew up each both then too late Alice who done to her Rose your mind to my mind your thoughts to my thoughts let us explore it one and whole together Tiv Tiver Naroooooooooooooooon! then too late was telepathic by touch suddenly too late nuked from here was Sliced was already dead but parmamently immortal but was in fact gifted so they began showing powers nuked then From here then was Not human at all anymore both vanish good then too late killed by them then More Volturi guards blew up was too late you Victoria with the both others die with them then Too late was As all of them good more as all of Volturi we declared them not welcomed there with as all of them aboard they are on Vulcan to remains are As all of them blew up bring them with the very as all of them bitten more than as to very last ones with they blown up then see Used as kelp then herself has a lot of friends are mated to Shifters are skinned alive then with as all of Vampires then Lost as all of blood then were as all of marked then Extinct from here to more as all of them then then lost from here see they are More they moved to a alien planet nuked were as all of them are dead but she and him became intimate but became Imzadi then a strange alien buzzing in his brain sounded like my own voice had Brown-Black irises was Mated by choice of husband healed faster was too late that myself looked more beautiful was very sexy to look at was striking more stunning cut it out Don Juan then too late was too late the cause of death was murder and as a result the Corpses wre skinned alive then too late was Over then causing more as all of it blown up cursed from here marked wre not human beings.

I liked it a lot and can’t wait for the next part.

This was a bit of a strange story with Bella's background, though, I did grow into it.

The relationship with Paul was a bit frustrating though, but I truly feel it was due to Bella's supreme stubbornness. And, though he couldn't help it, Jacob's treatment of Bella was not cool.

I would love for Charlie to be told about Bella's secret, even if he isn't informed bout the other two. I feel it is his right to know about his own daughter.

I was extremely disappointed with this story ending with "The End of Book One!", especially when it isn't exactly sure when/if part two will start. There are so many things that need to be completed, or cleared up. Plus, it would be nice to know where Bella's relationship with Paul will go from here, and what her supernatural part will bring.

With that said, thank you for sharing. :D

18. Chapter 18. Epilouge 2. then BBBBoth sliced then with his with bitten best friends the good who turned yiu then used my powers to Signal sea life blaring loudest take her/they with him/best the nKidnapped ith three sctreaming this one broke law a Turned One then Expriment on her by augmenting her/him/they screaming then too late with brain surgeries the too late with blood on my lips gulty of lies then Exerimented thenbut Augmenting then suddenly Brain surgeries weased memories a lot as all of chunks destroyd became twistd but vengeful with Alien Venom then turnd me into what good Sliced then but slicerd head-cord jailed was transtioning g

Epilouge 2
ALIEN RATLESNAKKES LOOK OIUT Then Bitten best friends were marked to Him again a real one then to others then too late with both Drained of blood then too late with three CLAIRE YOUNG MY GODDAUGHTER Bitten her hardest bit her adopted her as my own like a Immortal to kids then Blood sharing then finally Six kidnapped us with three with bitten kids with Aliens bitten with Vulcans then Resumed as all of ritualized blood sharing then then You are punished For crimes of treason for consorting hen Head-Cord with his/they with immortal children the health problems started good hunted this ones are mine ours then tri-bite marks blew freely bind her/him/army to us as sex slaves Nothingness more as all of it then then the very as all of it then Screaming then Experimented and Augmenting then too late then too soon then Where you thinking are leaving Brain Surgeries wiped out memories then Lost as all of blood Both sliced then too late Nothingness good burn them there they fled from here us/they then in America were so sick frailer then on land fled on foot the then Who turned you freaks tell us newborns the Take care of that the n then Attacked but Head-cord torn free Left for Dead officially beaten violented but Assassultd but abusing blew freely Cursed with Death forever the both found me/him/they /others were too late the Venom resumed speeding up then were next with us/they/them/both then Severance both taken from us/they then Punished as Cullens nuked freely then Brought then Killed good rip them alive they ae Cursed with Death officially they are deceased it was too late the caused of the blood of both were mixed up then caused my immortality with his/theirs with both gasp wit each bothnfive then too late Sliced both then vanished from the iciest snow from the NASA Bodysuit was a different clothes hair with bangs began viciously glowing then from the blimp then violently officially Screaming out to the heavens to Zeus's help then yelling by folding my own arms and hands like in the live action version of Sailor Moon said these transformation planetary words from my own lips then so they yelling out then a Planet burst into view was Betazed BETAZED TWILIGHT POWER! MAKE-UP! suddenly too late a most powerful echoing war cry like Lucy Lawless's one but letting loose a fiery Ancient Greek Xena Warrior Princess's war cry by a moist powerfully trilling war dirge glowing they yelled out then suddenly viciously Burst into fiery water then suddenly used my fingers to create my pure radiant golden/navy tiara then Had faster reflexes then trilling more soprano swirling my sword and Summoned my Chakra was Forged in a heat of battle a mighty princess oh god she is more powerfulk mess with her she will use her powers oh god Paul who are you Protected by Betazed the Planet of telepathy the Pretty Suited Soldier of Seduction Allow me to Grace you a Divine Punishment SAILOR BETAZED Will punish you in the name of the Almighty SAILOR MILLENNIUM IS HERE! by flipping my mask off revealing a true sailor suit/tiara it's her with her team you sure meet our daughter oh you poor things honey ys yikes guys Yikes my cat had a kitten kitty my own Aunt Artemis you mated on her cat oops oh how little then suddenly myself remembered from my previous life so they with his fainted from here from here Alice she lost blood again bodies are gone my princess of Betazed we are together again my warrior just Shut up and kiss me Imzadi we did then too late Caused a voice from here was Zeus's Paul Lahote son of Lycanon consorted with a priestess you have Mated with her by Ancient Greek law your marriage is Activated! to Bella Marie Swan daughter of My brother Gasp us oh my gods crap so us/they Bells you sound from Percy Jackson With you are betrothed from godly families no way Alice we are Demigods oh she fainted in shock Momma mia Sir! he marked a mermaid one bite of her she has claimed him as her mate oh no we are in a unicat with they with four thousands of them aboard safely protected with things then too late as all of the both our with theirs into Quarters then us/they but two were intimate it Warped from here too late nuked ten blew up good departed but time split us/as all of them it was too late Changed everything then Blinked from here then with the Gods/Goddesses from around the world nuked inside granted a new breed of vessel With as all of things merged with Vulcan ones asleep after both to as all of privately then as all of it then the Heaviest to more then a very heated one a very telepathic but alien but more galactic passionate make-out more romantic session then too late As all of it then was fiery but heated the very more powerful in Richard and Irene's quarters they Suddenly Richard began Moving inside her then to as all then were more to more then suddenly as Far he gone the Strongest he could the powerful was in love with him again then it really happened were Intimate was too private then More of it were heaviest It nuked freely then fled as far too much more powerful then Us/they with both us Women moaning noises was heard but vanished bodois oiled/massaged/latherd but lotioned then As all of it then the heaviest then then Sliced freely with as all of it vanished good guards they are Dead to final few/remains destroy them bring Irina and Victoria with others in then See them you die then were next then Suddenly screams was heard with his then good cut as kelp began feeling from the one Irina sensed her murder by them was killed by the Volturi from here then was a Empath like Deanna Troi mind melded him using my telepathic powers like a Vulcan woman had Vulcanoid Teenaged Ocampan ears were pointed the Telepathic mating bond began oh god you seduced me yes imzadi Hello Pack a Most beautiful Woman in the phase mated on me found me handsome like who William T Riker has these powers seduction by mind control could blow with her mind like a Charmed one then she is setting me on flames then too late too late Nuked freely vanished frozen solid good these ones are on Vulcan.

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Bella's pov blood bitten him harder then too late then he did the same then the Best friends of each four high schools the drinking with Alien Venom still have it the to both Drained with Aliens and the Vulcans then was more than five thousands cursing them to have powers then suddenly screaming killed me/him/they three for Study murdered exprimented by more Augmenting you broke this rule this one we been hunting you are punished then this one is not human take care of that the kidnapped with him/the three then jailed for crimes then Kept like this nuked both with him/us/they screaming the good guard we find you guilty Head-cord with their tore Cursed to roam Earth where you think are leaving then experiment onto her/him/they then then too late Nothingness good lifeless with they then Assassulted but abusing then then scars as all of them then Snapped freely fled used illiabity dead unwanted fled then burn them there it was too late then burning from here good more Volturi guards bitten freely then fled on foot the six beaten us/army Head-cord tore freely attacked left for dead nuked then cursed with death with both followed smashed freely with they suddenly too late Pierced freely brought there with the two with both with they good guard these ones are dead then Execution of it then too late Alice who done to her/him/they Volturi beaten but the both bites are popped with the mark/scars then then nuked us/they with them with they then blacking outside then hair was long with bangs snapped Cursed from here both then too la with them With the corpses then it really happened Vanished good guard departed but Cremation then it was too late more than as all of Volturi guards Stolen looks/names /powers and nuked with ten thousands or more blew up what more guards of the Volturi train them here You'r Sushi for taking our lives and our blood is deadliest to all screaming out the words a alien planet blaring held up my arms and hands the held it highest glowing but yelling the transformation planetary but galactic phrase words exploding in fury and anger and the watery fiery inferno was burning will mess with the mighty princess will forge in a heat of battle screaming out very loudest to Neptune my uncle for courage blessed it into my heart was stronger then yelling from here blinking shattering was fearless but brave and fierce: BETAZED TWILIGHT POWER! MAKE UP! Glowing mostly powerfully stronger fiery but violently planetary transformed so they then suddenly Trilling in he mostly gloriously heavenly but angelic ancient but more Greek Xena Warrior Princess's war cry sounded you guessed it Lucy Lawless was still swirling my sword and my Chakra was in fact trained gasp Protected by the planet Betazed the planet of telepathy the pretty suited guardian of seduction the guardian of fire and water Allow me to grace you a most divine punishment SAILOR BETAZED! blaring was tough as nails forged in a heat of battle a mighty princess had appeared oh my god she is not human so they crap in time was not human too late the cause of it never aged after the things were stored then With clothes packed in our king-sized bed with things both with tastes of genres and things then a telepathic sudden Heated but more passionate make-out session in the face of the galaxy then suddenly was attracted to him the more of it then kissing the more as all of it was fiery with my watery icy cold seduction onto him Strom heard us having a fiery but cold Romance then Sharing bodies and souls became one and whole then suddenly was more as all of it became Intimate was private was falling in love with him then suddenly too late nuked with two the four Smashed then never was alive too late good they ae Dead escaped to the starship with them rip them more Guards of the Volturi then nuked freely it really happened hey bud would you seriously get a room Don Juan knock it off it's disgusting like Captain James T Kirk she seduced me a voice in my brain too late where's Richard he's sick it's pon'farr needed to mate with Irene it was too late Richard his next door was so sick he was going in heat for a Woman so his age mate like on Vulcan the Plak tov hit him sweating it was time for them to breed then Became more than very far Sexually intimate with her then the more deepest but Romantic but passionate kissing first then felt the attraction of the couple herself was aroused but deeply felt from him Herself forced him to lean over then thrusted inside her screaming out then the burning but Searing heat of him eased the ache then Began moving inside her then deeper slower lighter then then stronger faster powerful but gotten too strongest then violently Squeezed then suddenly too late they were very private then Harder more than throbbing it was Mating season so they in four level then With more mating as all of couples did ritual in bed sick were male in heat but in mating season then Too late the Males did more moans of Women Oiled/massaged but lathered but lotioned and creamed suddenly too late Released semen/sperm were privately the more than as all of it covered with their Breeding men violently were Inside then suddenly Richard released semen/sperm then Resumed mating on her asleep then Moving inside her were heard hardest strongerst then Markig her hader while both Strom rank Commander was still grumbling could not rest or meditate of them breeding but mating like Vulcans was as all of them then too late Exploding then blew up but as all to both then nuked both with us/they too late gone folded space then Irene's mated scream left families alone then Vampires infested lands good dead bodies then too late Forced them to work harder too late arrival Irene was pregnant with eight kids growing out of control was tested Congraduations your mate is pregnant he passed out by fainting his illness was gone was the sire and father of eight children herself was crying more Emotional then in time as all of men fainted of their pregnant women sated Women who later had Kids crashed in Gol near Mount Seleya then to more onto the planet Vulcan made a planetary base to train and teach them to fight then My dolly what this a little girl my goddaughter oh no not children in time they were orphaned but lost as all of humans myself mourned but grieving in the Vulcan way was a Clan Matriarich in robes of Brown Vulcan funeral robes stopped aging looked beautiful but drop dead sexy to look at sang a Song was so haunting chanted to Lord Neptune my uncle was in fact rich in a mansion of our own so they granted wealth and became rich beyond their dreams jobs careers families blissed them with kids meditated was not human at all was a goddess of the sea and wealth fertlity and sea animals and sea life then used my finger tip a telepathic blaring signal like Aquaman was Immortal so he with they never aged or died blown up with they with the kids as all five then nuked freely Vanished good these ones are outlaws then never was alive Cursed by them suddenly too late never was Mortal again then As all of them conjure a shark crunched one Scout head and all killed him like T'Theliah was cruel to land people but cursed one with a mark was a Virginal priestess was forbidden to be touched oh no Captain! she has a power gone far too more stronger Alice had a vision to me oh my god you are not human they were as all of them Sir! she is a Murderess oh no not him, he is sweating of the heat wave what is that he stared at me he was so bewitched by my own eye color and my beauty was swearing alliance vows to me.

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Epilouge 2. then Venomized by ALIEN SNAKES Bitten him hardest drained blood to Best friends and as all of them Cursed them withy powers to Aliens/Vulcans to Bree and Diego then to The three with imprints with Him two men began officially drinking blood then by improving my feeding skills was Thirsty more than hungry then the Both venomous bites suddenly mutated me and They then Venom spread then Victoria/others with him fled to the Volturi reported a crime of myself turning them into my race and species to Immortal Children were very haunted most beautiful and deadly then captured of my crime finally gifted you Isabella are charged with Murder with them are punished then head-Cord Combination tore my life away with his/theirs good guard then then Executed then Assasulted by Abusing Violation by Fore Into pieces good with you then too late dying in my Bloodiest Blue dress was screaming of the Bites began turning me the Venom was aborsbed me so his with they Alice who did to you myself had Anime Falkor's red eyes of overdrinking oh my god the venom you die of her fled of us then then Ripped from here then then with they with him/they with the Cullens then too late brought there good guard the both is mixed up are killing them but ripped them you Victoria Laurent/others with Irina are Guilty Guards rip them with them there then screams of them then ATOMIZED By Vaporizing then more Volturi guards freed stolen from here it was too late to stop it was changed then so he/they Blew up they followed wit they both brought there good drained of blood with his mark is Death with hers/theirs then head-cord combination again see they are extinct then too late Was not Human anymore Alice they done to her/him/they what is it look on her finger Engaged yes Paul muy voice sounded Melodic different oh my god I Am his fiancée gasp her eyes are different as well then too late with theirs What is on my finger Isabella you bit me and I Claimed you by Tasting blood we have blood bonded it's rare Isabella Marie Swan will be my dear A'duna as your A'dun then suddenly tears fell Yes! then suddenly from the Living Room then the Ending credits of Red Sonja sparring swords suddenly felt from the Blood bonding from him and he felt from me suddenly gasp oh no had a Vision of us/they married by Dawn Read Spier my High Master was a priestess finally totally officially fully-time just offically Kissed harder hair of mine with Bangs flying then Alice planned our Vulcan marriage Pierced by popping freely with they nuked both head cord combination officially fully time and triggered first death but suddenly Became Immortal good they are Completely officially Deceased drained remains of blood as all of them bitten freely crunching from then too late then lost too much blood then without life Experiment-Augmenting them then too late then suddenly ker-blasting a roaring but booming noise recalling my previous life with his/theirs Alice she is Immortal been alive for two Centuries like who MacLoud Duncan the Highlander gasp she looks young how old are you more than 300 years old oh no we can't age then too late Spa treatment privately Oiled/massaged but lathered but lotioned hair removed peeling first as all of it Aloe Vera and Vapor rub for us both then finally were in a Unicat/thing in rooms for couples then it caused us to renew our blood bonded lifestyle heaviest but stronger and powerful a fiery but flaming very loudest lot of Moans of us and more kissing a lot of it passionate ones then the very fiery ones then Pierced freely by popping freely with them brought there see they are dead from the humans then too late then too late suddenly it really did happened the very far as all of it became his woman forever so they nuked freely both then vanished but caused my powers to enhance more stronger with his with theirs became mostly powerful the mostly strongest blown freely with they from here both vanished good the each both then were three then experimented it really happened never age of it looked young from here nuked both then With they vanished then caused me to stop aging so he/they Alice called the parents they are what Blood bonded she found her imzadi a what Paul Sabastian Lahote are her Equal mated partner it is for life but you just proposed marriage by saying in Klingon the Oath of Marriage to her she is fluent in as all of alien languages oh no ugh not that but that alive but raw My Husband eats it raw but living ulp ugh not Heart of Targ Gagh and Serpent worms a alien food he lost his salad and poor stomach went Green in the face Sir! she is eating Klingon food raw but alive then finally our last night as a unmarried couple began learning of the Klingons and it's mythology and history and culture began wearing both before my marriage was in fact Betrothed wore a very rich Jinag was of age to take a mate and a rich warrior husband myself looked like Vixis on her glorious wedding day to Klaa to bring honor to our Houses to bring forth Rich Klingon warrior children was in fact bonded by Blood in time Alice horrified of my clothes were both oh my god where you eat this alien food it is alive ugh what is that fragance her body is oiled/massaged to more then to her face then too late too late Was not human at all of it Alice she is ready for marriage young then too late Were in California Pierced freely both popped vanished with as all of them around the world's youth vanished with us/they gone good they are as all of them, they can't return to Earth they with things are on Vulcan were as all of them then too late murdered with the rest then More Volturi guards took over Earth used humans as slaves good more of it will make them obey us/they now go then they all of them are in time they were lost of my blood was so deadly was pure poison due of the blood bond they were with heirs as all of them nuked good these ones are lost from here see to it then never was as all of them it was too late the damage was done.

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' then ALIEN RATTLLESNAKES Bit me other wrist then too late blood boned to him bitten him too hardest then graced him Immortality then the to berst friends was too late then Drinkig blood of people like one had to heal to grace them powers but to recover then to Bree and Diego drank with a force of nature then myself was still thirsty then then with aliens/Vulcans the guard found me drinking blood good kidnapped with hi/these with then too the three bitten were blood boned then We found her drinking blood from as all of each both verdict to her/him/they Experiment on Alien sex death then are guilty then screaming then too late he Bred onto me mating more as all then sicker afterwards then the very far as all more monstrously as all of it Heaviest more thrusting and Quickeing then us/they were Sex Slaves then her cruelist smile good then then Screaming then both blew up with they with three Head-neck burst freely used unwanted but alone then lost from here good guard extinct them get them her/him/army then captured you broke rule then too late Nothingness both see deceased then too late the very as all of Volturi guards took our looks/blood then too late binded them then too late the newspapers reported us/army were with the both sickest frailer weaken but dying of eight kids Piercing freely popped both with they brought there good ended them then had Hatched a Egg like a Red Martian woman so they crunched became a mother of eight kids after mating crap our children my new voice three was far more than Seductive but Sensuous Alice is she ok oh my god then Ew we hatched from here then too late Pierced freely then popping freely with the kids then vanished lost more blood but the blood bond was far more Starfleet Marine Stronger but more Federation powerful my next level heighten but improved powers suddenly improved but more enhanced and so they with his with they then Irina/others we report a birth had happened she created children is a bound lady like her dead you die Guards then too late screams with her torn but ripped good rest/the others ripped her/him/they apart bring them there it came too late good what she/him/they never had kids bod is gone they were Bitten by snakes given the strength then more as all of Volturi guards end them as all of them good rid of the each both then too late myself never have kids again hair with bangs was suffering the Loss of Irina/others body was oiled/massaged but lotioned/lathered/creamed hair was lost then Aloe versa and Vapor rub suddenly what is on my finger please Isabella Marie Swan daughter of Renee and Charlie marry me then suddenly tears fell one glowing far more powerfully Yes! Alice I am Engaged hold on then the ending scene of Red Sonja then suddenly the music turned romantic then Kissed grossed out the Pack so the two were engaged hair flying Crossed Swords wearing from Thor the Dark World became his fiancée get a room Romeo urgh oh my god Congraduations hey guys they are Betrothed young then then we were in Scotland where Highlander was filmed there suddenly myself was Immortal so he/they with they the Ancient MacLoud sword fused with his then images of a previous life roaring but suddenly finally offically fainted like a Warrior woman of the Highlands of Scotland Carlisle! moan get off Woman gasp oh god I Heard a Woman's moan Garrett she fainted oops that Paul I Drink too much Scottish Whisky and ate haggis gasp Paul yes I Died there during battle oh my god you can't have more kids gasp she's What Immortal born in the Highlands of Scotland 400 years ago you have no rival nor death or illness you can't be killed or beheaded at the stroke of your sword will cause a Quickening the Gathering begins now to train with him/they in time never was human so he/they looked young then ker-Crashing oh Excuse me then noticed him with a young man found her who Bella with him/they yikes look we are not aging yes you now live like us/them ewe will train and teach you gladly than a normal human our families I Am afraid they are old by now than mourned by grieving then too late they were lost now trust fund from them now with help of each both.

This was great! Thank you!

Great story

Thanks for sharing.

I like to review even though this is completed. Hope you don't mind. This is an intriguing prelude. Good beginning.

And now I am sending this to my kindle, hugs Twinana