ngl the sex scenes seem very repetitive after a while. like the only new thing was having the second cherry popped, but like that's it. It also seems very bland. idk just not what I expected it to be ig.

huh I would've thought that Harry's reaction to him orchestrating their deaths would be explosive? not like huh, no wonder

oh so the incest warning does actually come into play :0

so 9 chapters in and now I'm thinking... it's not technically incest since they aren't related by blood? but ig it's the thought of it that counts?

I keep forgetting to say this, but love, smiled, and smiled kindly are used rather often. I feel like other words can be used sometimes but it's okay right now uwu

ngl but the last one OOF. The age gap kinda scaring me but I really wanna see how this plays out.

the idea of it seems nice, which kinda makes me wonder why there aren't that many comments. Also kinda wish I knew how they met, but I feel like it'll get there. Also wish there was a bit of a smut warning, but then again I feel like I should've expected it HAHA

Love this!

Please update! Loving this!