a little Weiss Blake interaction is good

going by the ending of this chapter and the next chapter's title, i am going to guess Blake either gets into a conversation with her dad and is uncertain of where to go and what to say or alternatively something to do with Ruby goes down that causes uncertainty in her life

Daddy Belladonna, and maybe Blake's mom as well, is gonna be coming to Vale. Really hope things go well for her.

Seems very overly dramatic. Yang is fine being in a three way relationship, and is fine talking about the sex she's having with Ruby in the room, but gets pissy when she walks in on Ruby and Blake sleeping next to each other? With their clothes both on, over the covers, simply holding hands? I mean, come on.

You're trying to have your cake and eat it too. Yang can't be four times as promiscuous as she is in cannon while a
*also* being super overly defensive regarding her sister dating. Thats not really how people work. If she's so sex positive she's perfectly fine being in an open three way relationship, she's definitely fine with her sister also having a relationship as long as she's being safe about it.

loved the chapter, it's good to see Ruby begin to finally move past her problem a little bit, and the dynamic of Qrow being really hard on her to get that was cool too. looking forward to the next chapter

a very good character development chapter

I eagerly await the temporary climax to this story, I do wonder what will happen come chapter 44, going by its title in the author's note Faunews, it will seem to be something to do with Faunas maybe a chapter with Blake maybe Velvet maybe something to do with a certain organization

anyway can't wait

Qrow was definitely an asshole here. He was right but that doesn’t mean that he wasn’t being an asshole.

Just wanna say that I really like the story. It never fails to make me happy whenever ther is a new update. Really good work.

Great chapter, I would say you definitely accomplished your goal!
I would support a break if your feeling a bit burnt out, I know how that feels and taking a break is always a nice reset. I will definitely still be here when you get back!

there seems to be a trope going on in RWBY fanfics in which Yang barges in at the worst possible moments, I swear it could be her semblance

good chapter by the way, also take what ever time you need to get the batteries recharged, hate to see this fic die due to writer fatigue

As an fyi for strike through, you should be able to generate the required characters as an html/unicode entity using a website. (Google strike through text generator.)

Havent read the chapter yet, but I'm enjoying the story. Cheers.

Love how much credit you give Tai. I feel most of the community in fanfiction really low balls him, and presents him as a weaker huntsman, at least weaker than Qrow, when I wouldn't doubt the two would be equals, or with slight strength differences.

Hmmmmm, an old man with a staff shooting green light using borderline magical abilities? I wonder who the legend is about

I was getting some serious siren vibes when the humming continued, as well as Blake's odd thoughts. A bit different from most of the canon Grimm, in a good way though. I like it doesn't rely on power and mindless attacks alone. Well done.

Something just caught me off guard with, "And I'm not gonna tell ya to go bonk my sister." and made me crack up for a second.

I never understood Freezerburn from a logical standpoint. Sure it's cute and they're good friends, but as you mention they are two people who are such opposites that, at least I personally, would see them clashing more than fitting well together.