Love your stories! Could you write the whole baseball game? Please?

Your stories is life my friend!

The quote at the beginning, that was from Cell vs Android 16 in DBZ abridged right?

I would love to read how a baseball game between Red and Black went. And the rage quits Darnic had.

Honestly, the whole thing with Yakumo in the anime made me give -10 points to Konoha ... and -9000 to Kurenai. If you include this in your main story, it wouldn't surprise me if you actually give Naruto his first non-Servant friend, but also make it so that there will be two rogue ... uh, they can't actually be labeled nukenin/rogue ninjas if they haven't even become genin. Oh right, that wouldn't stop Konoha labeling him such because he is a jinchuuriki, they wouldn't ever had allowed him to be anything but a shinobi, a weapon.
Yeaaah. No. Let him ditch Konoha. If I remember right, Wave Country was located near where Whirlpool is. Oh well, is your choice if you want to have Naruto going to his ancestral home or not. Still interested to see what happens next.

Hope you are doing well mate, ignore the spammers.

Hey haters this is for you if you can take time to hate on someone like neon then what are you doing with your lives you despicable wastes of human flesh!

A mostly despicable waste of space is what all your 'ideas' and you in general are.

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Happy to see you are back, hope everything gets better soon.

rest and recover first, then you write

Considering it's been a longer time than it has been in awhile since your last update I'm just posting to ask if your doing well since in your last few posts before disappearing you talked of being ill and your job being threatened so I hope things are currently working out for you and that you'll have time to come back soon.

Sir, no offense, but it would seriously be nice if you could, I don't know, actually concentrate on a single project, or two, or three? Or at least not have at least like 15 unfinished stories?

my guy, you need to focus on one story at a time, you completely remove any sort of tension when you made the beast a punching bag/comic relief. even if he's not the main villain you should still give some wins to even out the absolute stompings you punish him with.

otherwise there pretty good.

I used to enjoy your fanfictions in the past but then you abandoned all your previous stories and started pumping this unlikely stories like there's no tomorrow.

I don't know if you have some weird kind of writer's block or something but I highly suggest you take a break to get your mojo back.

My Friend...when are you going to continue all of your stories that don't revolve around the Fate series? Now I'm not claiming that your Most Unlikely series is bad or anything, it's confusing, and for someone like me, who never got into Fate or the Type-Moon Universe, those stories are pretty uninteresting and unappealing, so please, don't forget your readers who are interested in your older works.