Another finicky story that just does whatever it wants without caring about canonical realism. Weak narration and dialogue as well.

This is great

That was an awsome moment good job

por favor continua

Please update it’s so good!

But... Isn't the crossbow thing in a duel... considered dishonorable?

Badass!

This is awesome. Really love this story. I hope someday that you will be able to continue with it.

Great story! I'm excited to see more of this Renly Si, and see how he handles the rest of the rebellion.

This needs a lot more polish. Grammar problems abound.

I love this fic. But can you please update regularly

I've reread this story a couple of times and I still find it as satisfying as the first time. Can't wait until you update it to see what other twists you come up with. And now that it is clear that Renly won't be buddy buddy with Loras and they Tyrells I wonder what will happen. I always found it weird that he was so close after what happened in the rebellion and not hesitant to trust them. And how him and Stannis wasn't closer with what they been through during all the time they were together. Because Stannis practically raised him after their parents died being that Robert was in the Vale.
Anyway keep up the good work and hope you have plans to update soon.

great story. hope it continues

Interesting story but seriously need better grammar and structure. It's just hard to read when everything is bunched together into a big pile of paragraph.

Also work on basic grammar.

Please update .