| Reviews for The Boy Down The Hall (UP FOR ADOPTION) |
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NovaVoid chapter 10 . 6/25 Has someone adopted this |
frytrix chapter 10 . 6/9 Be sure to pm me or update a chapter telling me/us who end up adopting the story so we can cuntinue to read it. |
epantoja521 chapter 1 . 4/26 Love the story |
Momfriend chapter 9 . 12/30/2019 Where are the chapters? |
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 8 . 12/8/2019 This is beautiful! |
Nakaru Uzumaki chapter 5 . 11/21/2019 Also, "brought" is past tense for "bring" the correct word is "bought" |
Nakaru Uzumaki chapter 5 . 11/21/2019 It would be grand if you didn't use commas so much. "We have no idea, if the name he gave is real or a scam. Make sure, nothing is missing and make sure he does not approach my son until I confirm his identity." Every comma in this is completely unnecessary and just takes away from any semblance of immersion that I was starting to get. Otherwise, this is alright so far. |
James Oliver Wood chapter 8 . 10/14/2019 Can't wait for the next chapter |
guadadominguez4 chapter 8 . 9/23/2019 Thanks For The Update~! |
PoisonCupcake101 chapter 8 . 9/22/2019 Wait does he just have Chloe's and Sabrina's size for clothes in his home or something? |
Azarelrose chapter 8 . 9/22/2019 Love it :) More pleassse! |
grudgematch chapter 8 . 9/22/2019 Happy birthday |
guadadominguez4 chapter 7 . 8/15/2019 Thanks Fo The Update! |
HuangBaiLian chapter 7 . 8/7/2019 MORE PLEASE |
Lavagirl chapter 6 . 7/23/2019 I would like to have 60,000 followers. |