I love the way you put the compassion and love that Wonder Woman represents...

I JUST LOVE IT

This arc is starting to drag...

I hope he doesn't go around telling people he knows them from comics. It sucks when that happens.

Also, he should keep that killer instinct. Hate the no killing thing in DC. It's monumentaly retarded.

men have less DNA then women so you might* be able to turn female DNA into male by removing part of the X chromosome and making it a Y theoretically of course

Wait, so this guy is a legitimate battle junky who *loves* fighting, and even has experiences from his past life... but also hates the human race 'as a whole' because they always 'find a way to go to war with itself'?
Was this guy killed before he reached the age of 10 in his last life? Did he have a mental disease? I can't imagine anyone but a child thinking like that, it's just so shallow and stupid... Why are you making your main character an idiot? Isn't this meant to be an SI?

Wait a second...

It should be rain, not reign. Reign is to rule, like how a kind reigns over his kingdom. Rain is to precipitate water, like how it rains over a farm. When people reference raining on a conversation they are referring to the second one. Please consider getting a Beta or using Grammarly to check your chapters. That's a mistake in the very first lineC'mon!

Ehh, not impressed by the first chapter. The MC is illogical and the fight is way too overdone.

Genial! Amo esta historia e buscado mucho tiempo una con un hijo varón de WW! Fue genial encontrqrte.

PD: Todavía con esperanzas de que Artemisa sea el interés amoroso.

Okay the last two sentences were pretty cheesy “My Darling Luc” and “My son, now and forever.” Made my eyes want to roll out of my head but other than that, Bruce, Diana and maybe Manhunter are the only ones I’d think would be okay with being cloned, Bruce would just adopt him and then slap a Robin costume on him and fight crime together, kinda assuming with Manhunter but I don’t think he’d be angry at the clone and Diana was literally sculpted from clay, so a male clone is like the least weirdest form of procreation in Greek myth.

Author fiat angst fic. If he’s a kryptonian he should be able to rip off the collar, instant kill sports master, instant kill everyone in Cadmus. No reason for him not to, other Than you wanting the plot to go some direction so you hamfisted it despite making no sense.

Our guy seriously needs to learn some magic. I think John Constantine would be a good teacher. Please update soon

I had hoped he would call himself Achilles

This MC is incredibly inconsistent. This story needs a lot of work.

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