I loved this!

Great story. I hope Lucius Malfoy and the others who destroyed their family get what they deserve. Like Atria. Several minor errors in chapters. Excited for more.

Love this! Great chapter! Glad she is okay! Glad they got to talk to each other! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh no what's going to happen to the child. Hoping she won't be raised by the Malfoy's. Few minor errors. Looking forward to more.

I'm so happy Dora made an appearance I was wondering when you would decide to bring her in, if you did. I hope McGonagall comes back like SOON. Please continue!

Poor Atria. She can not catch a break! Hope she is okay. Good chapter. Nervous for the next chapter!

Ahhh such a cliff hanger! Love the story and I really really hope Sirius is found innocent. I read a ton where he keeps being on the run for ever and it gets boring so I hope this goes a different way but without way I'm sure it will be fantastic!

This is a very enjoyable story to read. I really like atria having toms diary. And, I think so far you've handled the prisoner of Azkaban very well. Starting on the 3rd book with flash backs along the way was a very good choice.

I'm going to take a moment to ask you to pay more attention to your grammer and spelling. A lot of the time you switch between past and present tense (which, can be very disconcerting). You also spell a lot of Harry Potter words incorrectly.

For example: aperating is one word you've spelt wrong multiple times. Then there's "hogwart" instead of "hogwarts".

Small things I know but if you put energy into double checking these things I think the difference would be noticeable.

Looking forward to the next one.

Amazing chapter! Hope everyone is okay. Glad Sirius and Atria got to have a reunion! Nervous for the next chapter!

So so so goooood

This chapter was absolutely beautiful, I'm so happy they've found each other finally. But Im still nervous seeing as the ending didn't seem very happy, can't wait for the next chapter and can't wait for Atria to properly get to meet her father. I hope she get to I hope you don't leave us hanging forever. Absolutely love this story!

Amazing chapter! Glad we see Peter's flashback. Hope Atria gets out of this okay. Looking forward to the next chapter!

OH MY GOD. It's Snape all over again but much worse, I AM PRAYING FOR A HAPPY ENDING. PLEEAAASSSSEEEE LET ATRIA BE OKAY. PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I CAN'T GET ENOUGH. I cant wait for Sirius and Atria to be reunited so please let it be next chapter.

You are kind of creepy and slightly depraved.

NOOOOOO! That cliffhanger. I'm so nervous for the next chapter!