I'm really enjoying this story. You are doing a really nice job with all kinds of neat twists and turns. Plus, Danny whump to top it off.

That was a big and good surprise to see Katsumoto ! Nice

They got in time and helped arrived. Lets just hope Gabriel is really dead for good this time. And uh Adam knows who was in the car. He rolled down the window and looked at the team on purpose for a reason. As in to say watch out. I am coming for you.

Yes, it's nice to see Kotsumoto show up!

Glad the team got out - amazing they were not hurt in the explosion. Poor Danny - his condition does not seem good. Anyone that is unconscious for that long of a time is concerning. I hope Steve gets himself cared for too, but you know he will always put Danny first. Great chapter, love the story. Thanks for the update!

Wonderful! It's so exciting, and good. Katsumodo was a great addition, because even though he's tough, he is a good man. Can't wait for more, whenever you get more done

I love Katsumoto on Magnum P.I. Nice to see him in your story!

Hey Katsumoto from Magnum PI cool guest star. Can't wait to find out how Danny is. Thanks for the update.

Why hello Katsumoto, one of my favorites from the new Magnum. Pleasure seeing you here.

Crank them chapters out, kid! I know it’s a bear sometimes, but just know that you entertain many people with your stories and I enjoy them. ;)

-Empress Akitla

Woah! Such an amazing chapter. I am soooo glad that Steve and Danny are alive. Chin leaving Gabriel was so hard for him, I'm sure, but I still don't trust Gabriel. Can't wait for more!

Ugh . I dont trust Gaberial. I think he will still be able to get away and get himself patched up. Good thing Danny is so stubborn and some strength let to help Steve out. Now all of them need to get out of there.

I am so glad you are writing this story again. Love this chapter- so many things happening! Danny’s alive, and looks like all the team is going to make it out - if Chin can get them all out of harms way. Will Gabriel die this time, or come back again another day? Glad he was thinking of Sarah and putting her first.

Ah, but is it ever truly over? Good to see this story wrapping up. Thought I wouldn’t see it. Excited to see how the rest of it plays out.

-Empress Akitla

Can’t wait for more

Shhhhhh this story is back! Can't wait for more :) Thanks!