“It was like time was frozen and nothing else mattered"
Lol
It basically is

this story is very good I hope the next chapter of this story

Shinji is love Shinji life

Could this be continued?! Please! Love the premise to this.

Hmm interesting. I like it so far. I think he can be a proper hero here.

I Fucking love this already! Please continue!

YandeRin is canon in Hollow Ataraxia (when they call future Rin and she goes full "I have a particular set of skills" when she hears Shirou is there) so she's IC at least.

It’s pretty sweet and ‘it’s filled with fluff.

I actually love the start of this. The premise is sound, and Rin still feels like Rin. Please keep updating. I wanna know what Rin does in that world XD

Yep this is a lot better than the original so far I mean not only is he not overpowered there's also a lot better of an introduction don't curious as to what he does as an agent of shield?

Nice rescue

Ahah kaleido ruby Rin yes.

Out of curiosity does ruby take over her occasionally like in that game Fate tiger coliseum upper?

I wanna see the avengers n Fury’s reactions to a fully Magic’s transformonf magical girl .

Though with the Ruby will she even need a sling ring? Seems redundant .

Interesting!
I hope to see more!

awesome

Genial historia.
Un épico inicio de esta genial historia de una pareja de enamorados. Aunque espero que Shirou y Rin tuvieran hijos (Gudako y Ritsuka) pero no todo en la vida se puede tener xD. Pero igual me conformo con tener a Shirou y Rin juntos.
Espero con ansias por el próximo capítulo.

yay it's here