amazing

I hope you do finish it when your ready and it is what you intended it to be from the beginning. Even though you said its not they way you wanted it i think the story is pretty good so far so keep it up

Hello! Well you know I totally adore your story, and I think you did a fantastic job with it! I hope you don't feel discouraged, because you wrote a really great story, and if you need a break from it, that's ok. I enjoyed it tremendously, and will follow any future works you put out. Take Care!

Hi!
I am sorry to know the story is not going on for a while, but I understand how you feel.
I hope this feeling will get better soon. Take your time. We will be here, because your story is very good and it is worth our waiting. (:

I'm really sad that your not going to finish it the way it is. it's one of the story's I look forward to reading every time it posts. I understand though. As the writer you have to be the one who's happy with it or it won't be worth it.

Hey I'm Italian and I really love your story and I want to ask you if I can translate this story for Italian .obv saying that is your story and not if you are ok with this
Let me know

i like it so far.

I love the relationship you’ve developed with his mother, and it’s especially endearing knowing that she has no mother of her own. Interested in seeing the reaction (officially) of her brothers. This marriage thing is quite the twist. I wonder if he’ll ultimately end up telling her what’s up or will he try to keep it quiet as not to influence her decisions. Great chapter!

I'm really enjoying this story so far! I stayed up until 3am last night binge-reading the entire thing. I love your interpretation of all the characters, but especially of Shikamaru. I hope you stay inspired for a long time - can't wait to see where this goes next!

OMG! I was so not expecting this. Damn. I cant wait for more.

Thanks so much for taking the time to write this.

Hope you update soon.

Great chapter! Things definitely got interesting! Looking forward to see what happens next!

The clan cornering Shikamaru was a reaaally good move! Cruel of them, but understandable. I still wonder whether Temari is already pregnant and that'll be the dealbreaker for their "early" marriage. Anyhow, great ending of the chapter, and hopefully you'll get time and energy to bring the story to its end relatively quickly.

I read this on literally two days. You have a very unique perspective on their relationship and I love it.

Thanks for taking the time to write this.

Hope you update soon :)

I love this fanfic! Great job! Definitely looking forward to your next update!

Hello! Sorry I got behind on my reviewing. Very nice chapter, it was nice to see the jealous side of Temari, and so sweet of Shikamaru to shave just for her. He really is a laid back kind of person underneath it all. The rematch was very good. I like that you had them tie, cause it shows that they are a pretty even match! I laughed at them both taking each other out at the end there. Thanks!