| Reviews for Brightest In The Dark |
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Mishi Gohiku chapter 6 . 10/9/2019 Ooh classic zuko- field trips just get the invasion over with first, fix the avatar, and start a zutara romance.. Check the plot and edit from there. Update soon. |
lilyflower49 chapter 6 . 7/22/2019 Love this story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
MakaylaCO chapter 6 . 7/22/2019 Wow I love this! You should definitely keep going! |
AzureTemplar3535 chapter 6 . 7/15/2019 Aang have go to far the extreme with inner peace, which means not only losing his ability to use fire bending. Also when it times to use his Avatar power against the Fire Nation, he going to go to far and do something unforgivable. Which is going to make the situation worse for everyone. |
FF8cerberus chapter 6 . 7/15/2019 Interesting little argument with Azula. The one with Aang is still off. He doesn't have any of his identity attached to him which I believe is wrong. Finding inner peace does not mean you become a blank slate like he did. He's made a mistake in what the interpretation of how to achieve the Avatar state is. It was meant to reach and activate it, not make a permanent change in his persona. Also, if he has the Avatar state then technically he has mastery over all the elements but the results of his firebending ate proving otherwise. He's screwed up somehow. That's about it. Until next time. |
LovetoRead613 chapter 5 . 7/9/2019 I like where this is going. Looking forward to more chapters! |
FF8cerberus chapter 5 . 7/9/2019 Looks like they've noticed. Not much else to go on with this one. Until next time. |
FF8cerberus chapter 4 . 7/8/2019 I'm surprised no one seems to be taking Aangs sudden change of attitude to be an issue or something. He's obviously become much more serious and monotonous to his previous actions. I would think some would of asked why he doesn't appear to be as happy and carefree as he used to be. Looks like Zuko still has a ways to go to earn the others trust. Not sure how things will go this time around. By the sounds of it, you are near the end of this story. I wasn't sure how long it would turn out to be am surprised that it is ending sooner than I had even considered. Good chapter. Until next time. |
Filipinagirl04 chapter 3 . 7/4/2019 EVERY desire, hm? *smirks* Sorry, dirty minded. But you know what would be cute? Whatever request Katara tells Zuko, he should reply with, “As you wish.” |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2019 This is pretty good. Aang is a bit cold but I like how you write zuko |
FF8cerberus chapter 3 . 7/4/2019 Hmm. Not enough to go on this time around. This seemed shorter than previous chapters. Until next time. |
geogirl2014 chapter 2 . 7/4/2019 Love this! Can't wait for more. |
Kira Ferris chapter 2 . 7/2/2019 Very nice so far. I hope you continue. |
FF8cerberus chapter 2 . 7/2/2019 Hmm. Did she just heal his scar off screen? Dang it. I bad hoped it would not come to that outcome so soon in the story. I had expected it to be used at a different location and for something other than his scar. Oh well. Guess I'll see what the next move is in the next chapter. Until next time. |
Moneneki chapter 2 . 7/2/2019 I'm really liking the story :D |