Reviews for Better Places |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a beautiful story. You really captured the heartbreak and sadness perfectly. I also love how you made Astoria understanding and kind. Although I will never ship draco and astoria, I love how you wrote her character this way. And the added Ron and astoria at the end was really sweet. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() That piano room bit made me snort laugh. haha Whew, this middle part is painful. And look at you sneaking in some Ron and Astoria. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My heart, this was just emotionally beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness. The rollercoaster of emotions reading this story! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm cryingwow the waterworks. I am so thankful with the ending but this one shot could totally be adapted into an anguish filled multi chapter depicting their love and the love his parents had for him to fix their mistake...BUT I'm selfish and super glad you wrote this as a one shot so I wouldn't shed too many tears and feel my heart break too much. Such a beautiful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great HEA! |
![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm not crying.. *sniffle* nope. that's just dust.. :') |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a lovely one-shot, I love it, I hope to read more, thanks ever so much, I also just favored you and your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This would be really amazing if you edited it, especially if you are thinking of making it a longer fic (which I would definitely read) For me personally, grammar mistakes and inconsistencies in a plot take away from the real potential of the story and make it less enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() It’s nice to know Lucius isn’t made out of stone after all...I thought this was going to be a tragedy when I started reading and was pleasantly surprised. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am speechless...I don't even know how to respond... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this |