Hmmm, the premise is good and so is your writing. I'm hopeful for the story. One thing that i might take an annoyance to is how easily Spike was called out to be an impostor, the first thing that comes to mind when someone is different isn't exactly body takeover (even though you know...Ozpin). Anyway am hopeful for more soon, good luck.

Pretty nice and funny chapter, trough I still have some problem to follow how they reason, tali and similar, shouldn't they try to get closer to RWBYJNPR instead to unrelated faunis. Let's be clear, I don't dislike ocs, but I think you Need a more proper direction, starting with the group discussi g what's going on and what to. Aniway, hoping you're enjoying volume 7, keep up the good work and Happy New year.

I really only have one question, is T coming from earth or mgq because dear god would that be funny

... Very very interesting... Looking forward to the next chapter

XD keep up the good work I love T, he is hella funny! XD

damm Spike just dished out 28 stab wounds on that cat and now he's gonna get beat up by a trap
nice seeing T doing a dark souls with cardin followed up by a nut shot; god knows he deserves more

I like how Glynda is slowly giving up on her life because of the atitude shes getting, and she cant do anything because theyre not really wrong about how they go about things.

I have to say... the trap and kitty faunus debacle side-story for Rus is really interesting, and im not use to reading material with that kind of orientation. Im actually surprised on how the internet and memes have changed my preferences on the things I like to read!

Please, do give us more. Keep up the good stuff.

Hilarious.

a lovely chapter that was :D

"No writer on Earth would let him ever be painted in a good or even repeatable light." - Spike in Russel's body
Depthcharge2030: "Allow me to introduce my story"

So. We got someone somewhat average for Sky, an absolute edgelord for Russel, and a weeb for Dove. Yeah, seems about right. Now just make Sky gay, turn Russel into an uncaring delinquent, and build on Dove's newfound love for baked goods so much that he becomes proficient in the art of baking, and we've got ourselves 3 character ideas that have been used for other stories at least once. Don't expect you to take this seriously, but it's always worth a shot. It seems like you ain't getting around to solving the vendetta against Cardin anytime soon, so hopefully, you're prepared to confront that in later chapters. I do like how you're slowly trying to ease them into the "normal society" inside the main cast, while at the same time giving all three guys their own unique perspectives. Can't say I expected that, but then again; what do I expect?

...Actually, nevermind that. Just go with whatever you think is going to make this a great story. Inside references or not, I'd enjoy your story nonetheless. Mainly because it's about 3/4 of my favorite team, but I digress.

Keep up the good work with the grammar there, and I hope to read about my boys soon, you croissant-throwing bastard.

Not bad, it's a very interesting take on the concept. Keep up the good work.

While the setup has been done before with only a couple of stories involving anyone from team CRDL being replaced with someone else's soul, this is probably the first time that has three out of four of them being used as vessels for people from Earth. Definitely like to see where this story goes.

Not bad chapter, Russel's 'torture' was very meaning trough a bit messed, but i guess is still me that has to understand what's truly going on, while i'm curious to see their training program... oh, and of course the Cowboy Bepop reference was great, always eager to meet a fellow fan. Keep up the good work and see you soon.

...Interesting idea. I hope you'll make this work.

oh my god finally
i will follow this story till it's dying breath

Polkatown, thank you. Just... thank you. You don't know how long I've been waiting for a Team CRDL story that's as high-quality as this. Sure, it's a body-swap fic and that's always a bit iffy for me, but you've made up for that in the references. Oh god, the references. I can't stress enough on your decision to make 3 out of the 4 bird boys change for the good. It's not every year you see some up-start author attempt this kind of story. The only thing I ask of you is that you strive to improve the writing and grammar and that you don't get too crazy fucking up canon events.

Though, if you were to REALLY fuck up the canon, may I have a suggestion? Search up the ship name "Domestic Abuse" and try to make it happen with your boys. I don't mind if you decide to make it fuck up spectacularly; it's your call.

Hope you don't make this into a shitty two-shot fic and actually develop this into something that could bring something to the name of Team CRDL (or at least your vision of it), you jerking-to-Faunus-porn bastard.